this is the story of a girl (in progress)

[pretty_in_mango]

she was going to be a writer some said
they could see it in her eyes
secrets hidden beneath those colorless gems

she learned to manipulate boys at an early age
yeah they were smart, but she was smarter.
throwing a look that could kill witches at any girl
who flirted with her boy.

gaining attention was easy
with those guazy see through

Comments

hey

[anonymous]

hey becky,

Re: hey

[anonymous]

um yea i dont know what happened but i hit enter too early and ajnfiasbvoaisjfd, as i was saying, you are the coolest runner/girlfriend of scott(has huge lips) that i know. have an excellent summer and keep in touch. talk to ta later, your pal, paulo

[jellerific47]

okay so i just most definatly read that wholeeeee entire thing really really fast, i'm like wonder women, i know.

is this the story of your life or is it a possible song!!?

buy anways, i like this >> she learned to manipulate boys at an early age
i'm asking for permission to take it, beciase i hate when people take things without permission, lol soooo may i take it?

[___sodapop]

i think it's just a poem she wrote..

anyways,
props fo you. i like it. except some parts confused the hell out of me but i'm kind of delierious because IT'S SUNNY and I'M HOT AS HELL (the temperature kind, not looks kind). :)

[civman2]

Is this poem about Becky?

[anonymous]

why does this thin talk about you manipulating other boys? and wen did you where see thru tops? and why do you always act like you drink or want to drink in school and thn bust out with this?

[pretty_in_mango]

whoaa there its not about me.
but thanks rach, im still working on it.

duh

[anonymous]

its not about becky she just writes AWESOME amazing poems<3 and i love her for that. :). but becky could do all those things if she wanted too!

[anonymous]

Seems like it will turn out to be pretty good. Very creative.

chris

SPONTI

[anonymous]

i like that, beck.

oh and p.s.
when are we going to laser tag?
anytime soon would be great.