fic: maybe won't get you anywhere

Dec 31, 2008 00:36

Title: maybe won't get you anywhere
Rating: PG
Pairing/Characters: Jaejoong/Yunho
Notes: This is me, wanting to get my word count over 100,000 this year... :|
Summary: No one believes Jaejoong, Yunho is too responsible for his own good, and five years is a long time.

It’s so cliché, so fucking hackneyed that Jaejoong would’ve laughed at him for it had this situation been any other. )

fandom: dbsk, pairing: jaejoong/yunho

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mousapelli December 31 2008, 06:34:57 UTC
dlfjlfajlfafja WOEZ. you really had me, right up until the last second i was all "this isn't going to work out WHAT" but then you fixed it~

excellent way to end the year. UNLESS YOU WANT TO WRITE MORE SHINee. THERE ARE 24 MORE HOURS YOU KNOW.

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preorder December 31 2008, 07:13:50 UTC
dead COULD I REALLY WRITE AN UNHAPPY ENDING. Thank you~

Hey I have written more SHINee than this fandom deserves okay!! You should write more. :| ♥

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kallistei December 31 2008, 07:02:23 UTC
:( Yunho is such an idiot.

(Also, ♥ for you.)

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preorder December 31 2008, 07:21:53 UTC
He is, but he is an abnormally attractive idiot, so. :|

(Aw, thank you! *takes a ♥*)

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kallistei December 31 2008, 07:25:46 UTC
Still an idiot :(

( :)) )

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preorder December 31 2008, 07:27:24 UTC
Thank God he has the rest of DBSK to keep him in line? :(

(♥♥!)

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kroongho December 31 2008, 07:04:56 UTC
Made me cry. :'(

Amazing. You're new? WHAT. Characterization is ace. Love it. Lovelovelove.

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preorder December 31 2008, 07:25:08 UTC
What, really! :o *gives you tissue*

Flattered! And I'm only relatively new - I've been in DBSK fandom for hmm about a month or two...Thank you so much, I'm so happy you like my characterization! :)

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riiche December 31 2008, 07:27:03 UTC
“Yunho.” There is friendship before adoration in his tone, Dong bang shin ki before Kim Jaejoong.
HELL YES. EXACTLY. EXACTLY.

“Eh. Soulmate connection.”
JaeChun!friendship always brings a tear to my eye 8'D

I don't know what exactly I loved about this, but perhaps it's because it's not exactly just Yunho and JaeJoong who are dealing with this relationship, it's their friends who are also dealing with it - accepting it, adjusting to it, understanding it, or in the case of Seunghyun - finding out about it. That, perhaps, was my favourite thing about this fic.

Seunghyun is from Big Bang? 8D I don't really know the band but it's nice to read about the boys hang out with friends outside the five of them. Because they do have actual social lives, especially JaeJoong! <3

Thanks for sharing! :)

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preorder December 31 2008, 07:37:38 UTC
Your comments make me happy, especially since I admire you so much as a writer yourself. :(( ♥

Oh soulmate love. :')♥

I like that Junsu's Christian and that it wouldn't be acceptable, considering their line of work - I really like plausibility in fic, as ironic as that may be. I'm glad you liked my Seunghyun, I had the most fun writing that section. :x

He's better known as TOP, or the main rapper! :) There's another Seunghyun, the younger one, Seungri, who is apparently a ridiculous Junsu fanboy. I feel like Jaejoong's ridiculously popular, the type to have like 700+ friends on Facebook whom he all knew personally if he...had a Facebook...

dies, long reply is long. Thank you for the comment! ♥

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yuxo December 31 2008, 07:50:49 UTC
dies clare that was absolute perfection everywhere. yunho was being a dumbass but that line what was it the crushing weight of Dong bang shin ki combined with tradition combined with the one dream of being a father that he just can’t seem to shake and Yunho wonders - what made him brave enough to kiss Jaejoong the first time? is so, fucking, PERFECT.

idek how you do this characterization thing new to fandom my ass. >:llll you've been a sekkrit dongbang fan for years already i can tell!! :DDDDD

no but seriously, just, ugh. why are you like this. why are you so, so, sooooo gooooood. *_____________________________________________*

i love your writing. so. much.

and i ship jaeho when it comes to you. :'D ♥

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preorder December 31 2008, 07:54:46 UTC
jdkg Yuxi what the hell I'm so flattered to get this comment what. :[ God, Yunho you straight, upstanding man. :[ ilusm ♥

gkjhsj YOU CAUGHT ME.... ... .. I have secretly been a man of them for three months instead of two. T__T

Oh Yuxi thank you so so so much. I love your writing, so this is doubly flattering. ♥

gjkds dead :'D that is a big compliment.

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