DS9 FanFic, "Marked," G/B, [R/NC-17], 3/6

[prelocandkanar]

 Here's part 3 of 6 of "Marked."

Title:      Marked, Part 3 of 6
Author: PrelocAndKanar
Series:   DS9
Code:    G/B

R/NC-17 (though not graphic) for semi-consensual and consensual m/m sex, torture and angst. Don’t read unless you’re into this sort of thing.

Disclaimer: I fully acknowledge that Paramount has exclusive rights to the Star Trek universe,

Comments

[agadinmar]

*chews on her fist* Okay... it's impossible to wait until tomorrow, I must read part four right now. Mean cliffhanger... *sniff*

“Stinky?” Julian offered.
My thoughts exactly! *g*

To Julian, it sounded like a purr. To Garak’s ears, it sounded like prayer.
Usually I'm a fan of dark stuff... the darker the better... but your story makes me want to say "awwwwwwwwwwww". that bit is so lovely! Especially considering setting and plot of this fic *awwwwwwws once more*)

>>Dukat
=O OMG! I l♥ve your Dukat. Seriously. He's fantastic. An evil genius. God. Poor Julian (and poor Garak, of course).

[lilyoftheval5]

Then, like a weird folk dance, the four of them, in perfect synchronization, bobbed their heads slightly from the base of the neck and with each head-bob, took a step backwards, one, two, three, hissing oh-so-quietly, for all the world like they were birds performing some bizarre mating ritual. It lasted only a moment, and it looked like an automatic reaction.
This image was fantastic, just like your characterization actually. It's hard to believe this is your first fic.

[prelocandkanar]

Oh, I'm glad that image came across well. I could *so* see it in my mind, but I wasn't sure that I was able to describe it well enough for the reader to get it. The description seemed to take so long; it was actually longer to describe this "bit of business" than it took to play out. It was meant to be this quick, subtle reaction... Anyway, thanks for the feedback!

[genclay]

oh my...

Thank god i can go straight to the next.

[jolinar_rosha]

oh thank the gods I've discovered this after it has been completed - otherwise I'd be going crazy over here right now!

[prelocandkanar]

:D

You know, LJ makes you break up long Fics into pieces.... But maybe it makes an effective suspense-builder!