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Fic - Future Foe Scenario (part 1)

Jan 28, 2011 21:00

Title: Future Foe Scenario
Author: Prehistoric Cat
Rating: PG
Genre: Gen
Characters: Abby, Connor, Danny, Burton, Jess, Becker, Matt
Warnings: spoilers for series 4
Disclaimer: not mine, no copyright intended
A/N: Title comes from "Future Foe Scenarios" by Silversun Pickups, thought it was appropriate ....

"When present tense gets strangled in the woes
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character: abby, character: connor, character: becker, character: matt, fanfic, gen, primeval, character: danny, character: jess

Comments 25

fredbassett January 28 2011, 21:32:16 UTC

That all looks pretty plausible to me!

prehistoriccat January 28 2011, 22:23:41 UTC

Thanks, it felt that way when I started it, now I'm not so sure... hope I get this finished before it becomes too AU LOL

jkahane January 28 2011, 21:34:51 UTC

Wow! :)

That is one heck of a story so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

You've got the characters of Connor, Abby, and Danny down really well here, and I'm looking forward to seeing more. Keep up the great work! :)

prehistoriccat January 28 2011, 22:25:01 UTC

Thanks! Connor, Abby and Danny are my favourite characters, so I do tend to focus on them. I hope you're not disappointed by the rest.

jkahane January 29 2011, 15:49:12 UTC

I have to say that I've never really seen the appeal of Connor and Abby in the series, as to be honest, Connor came across too much as the Wesley Crusher of Primeval during that first season, though I did appreciate his character development as the series has gone on.

As for the story, you have a very good, very clean writing style, and you don't seem to waste words, something that I really like. So I don't think I'll be disappointed by the rest of the story. :)

pottsfanatic January 28 2011, 22:13:09 UTC

Oh you clever monkey.....I love this train of thought. Can't wait to see the next bit.

prehistoriccat January 28 2011, 22:26:04 UTC

Thank you!! *g*

tay_21 January 28 2011, 23:29:11 UTC

This is brilliant. I'm totally hooked. :-D Fantastic job. When are you posting the next part?????

prehistoriccat January 29 2011, 09:35:44 UTC

Thanks!! Hopefully, I'll get the 2nd part up in a day or so - It's almost written but needs a bit of padding to the dialogue... after that, I'm aimming to tie it all up with a 3rd part before episode 7 airs here next weekend.

reggietate January 28 2011, 23:30:12 UTC

Now that's a possibility I hadn't considered! Nice idea :-) Looking forward to see where you take this.

prehistoriccat January 29 2011, 09:42:47 UTC

Thanks *g*