Smoke and Mirrors, Chp 9

[preach_electric]

I've just been a writing machine this week! I guess it's my haste to get as much written as possible before I go back to school. Anyhoo... onto the fic.

Title: Smoke and Mirrors
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[oflights]

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Man, I seriously had chills reading this, omg. This is sooo good! Poor David. God. All of his friends have completely betrayed him, and he's alone and dealing with all this- I just want to hug him!

And Brooke- I hope she saw Syesha's face, but then I hope she didn't, because I almost want this whole thing to go down without anybody finding out anything, LOL. I just don't want the two of them to feel that betrayal when they find out who's behind them. Man, that's gonna hurt.

So what's Carly gonna do? OMG, you must post more soon! I can't wait, ah! Great, great job, I love this.

[preach_electric]

Chills?! Wow! That makes me happy. :] David is pretty alone, isn't he? I feel cruel for doing that to him. :[

There's gonna be some Brooke POV the next chapter, so there will be more about that. :]

And Carly's a woman on a mission. That's all I'll say. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! I love your feedback. :]

[hedgie125]

Wow, this is getting better and better with every single chapter!! I'm so excited to see what's gonna come up next!

And also, I'm very curious to know what happened to everyone to actually make them do that. I mean, they must be so desperate to actually kidnap one of their friends! O_O

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

[preach_electric]

Yay! Glad you're enjoying it. And I guess fame can do a lot to people as well as losing fame. But some of them have a bit more of a motive. Hee hee.

[shimes]

you are a beyond amazing writer! i can't wait for the next chapter :)

Please continue

[mismatchrepair]

I just came across this story recently and I love it!!! Please continue....please?!?!

:D