Comments | pre_raphaelite1: Last of the Ficlets

pre_raphaelite1

Last of the Ficlets

May 24, 2006 20:18

As xellas corrected me.

I do love these, particularly the last one which is dedicated to fleshdress. Though the "Ted and Cheesecake" fic I posted a few days ago still makes me grin.

Prompt: "Minerva and Tea Time"
Rating: PG-13
Length: 339 words
Warnings/Kinks: Tom/Minerva
Summary: Minerva waits, tea and chess laid out.

( Minerva and Tea Time )

tom/minerva, my fics, draco, minerva, anthony, blaise/draco, angst

Comments 11

wildestranger May 25 2006, 08:37:36 UTC

Oh my. Everybody likes to write stories to make me cry these days, it seems. *sniffles*

These are lovely.

pre_raphaelite1 May 25 2006, 08:46:12 UTC

Or is it merely than you have accidently acquired a soul in recent weeks? *giggles*

*cuddles* Thank you darling. You are lovely too.

_emeraldgreen May 25 2006, 11:00:52 UTC

Oh goodness, the Draco one has me all wibbly. The twist at the end of the Tom/Minerva was wonderfully chilling, and the Anthony ficlet was just gorgeous. ♥

pre_raphaelite1 May 30 2006, 18:48:44 UTC

*snuggles you and your wibbles*
Thank you so very much, love.

lyras May 26 2006, 00:19:36 UTC

Oh, wow, the Draco one is excellent, with him teetering on the edge of decision. Love it!

The other two are good, too - poor Ginny :(. But I love the way Minerva literally sets the scene. And the part where Ginny speaks, but it's Tom's voice...gah.

pre_raphaelite1 May 30 2006, 18:49:43 UTC

*blushes*
I think the Draco one is my favourite out of this lot.

Glad you enjoyed them.

rosewillread May 26 2006, 05:16:44 UTC

1. Wow.
Oh, I can feel that. The detail and care in the setup description kind of fooled me into think I knew what was going to happen. And I kind of did, but not like that. And the chess board.

2. Anthony! *pets* It seems like maybe it should be mournful. But it really isn't. Just clear and free.

3. Well, now, have me feeling for Draco. Well done. Blaise and promises as chains. And the last bit, the Mark, rather than his own decision. Owls flying off into the sunset should be good things, although supersticiously, they're not.

pre_raphaelite1 May 30 2006, 18:51:36 UTC

*hugs*

1. Oooh, what did you think was going to happen? Just TOm come through? *is curious*

2. Anthony: *blushes but accepts petting*

3. *chuckles* I do owe a lot in these drabbles to CQ and feeling for Draco is probably one of them, even if he is terribly mad.

rosewillread May 31 2006, 11:46:12 UTC

I knew that it wouldn't just be Tom coming through the door. But I thought that it was set at a different time or something. So there was no way that it could be Ginny.
I think I was expecting no one. Just Minerva's memory of him.

serpent_lord May 30 2006, 15:18:34 UTC

Well, I'm particularly partial to the first one. *g*

Truly though, bias even aside, it's really excellent. The setting, and her thoughts/anticipation - her feelings are so well and strongly expressed. *cheers* Wonderful, amazing drabble.

And the mood of the second is fantastic as well *cheers Squid* it definitely gave a wonderful feeling of space and the outside.

The last one, too - wonderful how all three of these have a theme of waiting, and how differently it is experienced by all three characters. *cheers*

pre_raphaelite1 May 30 2006, 18:55:11 UTC

*grins* Of course you are, love. But thank you so very much for the lovely feedback. You always make me squirm from you comments.

The squid should get more love. And not just the pervy kind.

And I mixed up the order when I posted so I'm glad that they are unified by the theme but that it wasn't just a straight run of waiting drabbles when I wrote them. If that even makes sense... which it probably doesn't. *giggles*