FIC: "Subtle Shfiting Shades"

Jan 18, 2006 22:30

After a prolonged absence, I prove that I am alive with a fic I wrote for sethkyne_blue who I love dearly and has kept me as sane as possible during the last month, all things considered ( Read more... )

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sethkyne_blue January 18 2006, 23:16:11 UTC
Three words...
I love you.

Several additional ones...
More than should be humanly possible.

I am wibbling and squeeing and wriggling in my seat. No kicking of feet because I would probably tumble over backwards if I did. Jam and showers and Shakespeare and Minerva with whiskey. Eeee!

And OMG, I'm being a big soppy girl, but this part totally killed me:
His fingers curved with wanting it, but something in the back of his mind taunted him that this wasn’t real, that time and body didn’t exist, that a single touch would shatter the bubble of the illusion with a burst of rainbow.

*wibbles*
You are fucking amazing.
*adores*

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pre_raphaelite1 January 19 2006, 01:34:27 UTC
Four words:
I love you too.

And a few more:
So very very much.

No falling out of your seat as that would be bad and you might damage yourself and then where would I be? Bereft and pornless and it might impair our piercing/sextoy/alcohol/HP/porn plans (aka Lumos).

Really, I only missed the tulips.

Yeah, somehow I don't think that was entirely me right there. *smiles* But it's my favourite bit too.

*cuddles closely*
Thank you, love. "You're nae too bad yourself." *winks and snogs*

I still can't believe you got me to write Mpreg. Neither can Anthony.

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wildestranger January 19 2006, 00:52:43 UTC
This is lovely. I don't even mind the fluffiness, it's just lovely. *hugs fic and hugs pre_raphaelite1*

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pre_raphaelite1 January 19 2006, 01:25:56 UTC
Wow, you didn't mind the fluff? *is most pleased*

*returns to betaing The Thing*

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wildestranger January 19 2006, 02:46:08 UTC
The fluff was lovely. As for the mrep, I'm thinking that it's not a squick in the sense that say, watersports or object insertion are. People may not like it, but it shouldn't produce permanent trauma in them.

So in case you were worried and in case anyone complains, just tell them I told you to do it. ;)

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pre_raphaelite1 January 19 2006, 02:51:39 UTC
I still don't think wand sex is squicky. *winks*

Yes, I'm still awake. And Yes, I'm still betaing. BUT! I'm nearly done now. Just gotten to the vampire comment. *grins*

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fleshdress January 19 2006, 01:05:29 UTC
Sirius/Anthony? Unexpected but deftly handled. Good to have you back, sweetheart. :)

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pre_raphaelite1 January 19 2006, 01:24:51 UTC
Ah yes, the utter nonsensical AU from Commentland that some how gives us teenage!Sirius/teenage!Anthony as oddly viable pairing. That combined with sethkyne_blue and I being completely insane. That always helps.

And thank you.

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Fic: Subtle Shifting Shades secondsilk January 19 2006, 03:36:53 UTC
Quiet sweet. A real and lovely picture of them, and Sirius naming the girl James. So Sirius.

I knew what was coming, because I read enough of that thread at the orgy to pick up the bedspread and the jam. So I was prepared, and it was great.
I don't normally try to offer praise in such away because it doesn't always work. But you avoid all the bad possibilities of Mpreg, which is an amazing feat. It really worked well with Sirius's general disbelief at the situation, which was a real reaction for him.
Anyway, very, very well done.

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archon_mentha January 19 2006, 19:54:26 UTC
Good grief - what's with the jam at CQ? MPreg everywhere! EEEEEE!

*giggles* Very sweet. ^___^

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