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praysolace

Reaching for the Moon: Chapter Eleven (End!)

Sep 06, 2012 14:14

Reaching for the Moon

(Final) Chapter Eleven:
A Song for You
I've acted out my life in stages, with ten thousand people watching; but we're alone now, and I'm singing this song for you.

( The end of a love story fifteen years in the making. (18+) )

jack, geneveive, adam, yaoi, story, bl, taira, melanie, syd, reaching for the moon

Comments 4

donhisiewen September 7 2012, 04:07:53 UTC

Yaaayyy! Now that is such a satisfying ending that I feel I should smoke. It's really beautiful ( ... )

praysolace September 7 2012, 04:26:09 UTC

Don't... don't let my writing lead you to self-destructive habits? o.0 ( ... )

donhisiewen September 7 2012, 06:13:23 UTC

Nah, I was only kidding. I quit years ago and haven't missed it.

I forgot to add, my favorite part is this:
Gently, Jack brushed Taira’s arms apart. “Let go of the me who couldn’t do anything for you ten years ago, and hold onto the me who loves you now.”

Yeah, it makes sense. I feel that Taira won't just be dropping things on Jack's foot in the future.

praysolace September 7 2012, 16:25:54 UTC

Whatever Taira does to him, though, I'm sure Jack will totally deserve it XD