[fic] i don't know you anymore

[praiseofshadows]

Title: i don't know you anymore
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: Rish (for disturbing imagery of violence and sex)
Spoilers: RotS (specifically the novelization which has Palpatine continuously questioning Padmé's sexual reputation)
Disclaimer: Obviously, Star Wars is not mine.
Summary: So, the RotS game has an alternate ending wherein Anakin wins at

Comments

[nathskywalker]

Well written. This fits the character of psycho!Anakin and while you don't use too many words, you really hit the point.

[praiseofshadows]

Thanks! I'm so glad this caught your eye! ♥

[syolen]

I agree with nathskywalker. Fitting and well written indeed.

[praiseofshadows]

Thank you so much! ♥

[hellboy]

If you will excuse the term, this was "totally brutal." I mean, in a good way, but yeah, brutal like whoa. Kind of made me tilt my head and go "hmm, american psycho a la Anakin, so lightsabers instead of a chainsaw."

I love the sparseness of the text, how you used only a few words and got it across that the dude is just a little too crazy. Awesome, Femke, absolutely awesome ♥

[praiseofshadows]

Hahahah -- dude, I think Anakin would like a chainsaw. But then maybe not. He's crazy, after all, so maybe it's better for him to stick with what he knows! Glad you liked! ♥

[pronker]

Wow, this is good! So glad I've discovered your work.

[praiseofshadows]

I'm so glad you liked it! ♥ ♥ ♥ Thanks! :D

[emavalexis]

Mmm, powerful stuff here. You show Anakin's descent into his Vader persona really, really well.

Christ, I suck at leaving good feedback right now. Heh. But suffice it to say, I really dug on this.

(Anakin/Padmé, in the strictest sense, is creepy love, indeed. I love your take on them, even if I fanwank the fuck out of them myself and write them in a decidedly less-creepy way. Hehe. I definitely prefer fics that paint them in a more realistic way or 'darker' way, if you will.)

BTW, do you mind if I add your journal to the jedi_news watch list? I think more people would probably like to read your stuff. Only if it's okay with you, though. :)

[praiseofshadows]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked my take on Anakin-to-Vader! ♥

(And yes, they are. Incredibly creepy. I mean, you have someone who tells a girl to her face that he's been obsessing over her for ten years. Since he was a little kid. That's just...not healthy. And what's even less healthy is that she goes with it. And I suppose that's why i like writing them -- just to see where their issues will take them XDDD)

And...sure, if you want. I don't have a problem with it - though it will be weird to see my name up there! :D

[emavalexis]

Well, okay, actually we typically will not watch private or semi-private journals through the watcher journal, so this is as good an excuse as any to add you to my own friendslist. :) Is that cool? You seem like a cool person! I'll just do it and if it's not, tell me to fuck off. Hee.

(Yes, I overuse words like 'cool'. I'm lame. Heh.)

[praiseofshadows]

Yay for new (Star Wars) friends! ♥ I shall endeavor to try and be cool...'cos I'm totally anything but XDDDDD Especially since it's NEW FRIENDS TIME! ♥ ♥ ♥

(And cool is my favourite word. Really. :D)