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poweroffunk

Bed Intruder

Aug 17, 2011 19:50

Bed Intruder ( Read more... )

rating: pg, category: gen, category: fluff, character: sherlock holmes, character: john watson, category: humor, category: friendship, pairing: sherlock/john, fanworks: fic, category: pre-slash, category: drama, category: angst, category: non-con, category: ust or one-sided (unrequited), category: hurt-comfort

Comments 10

idril_earfalas August 19 2011, 21:59:48 UTC

Oooh!!! I like it! Sweeeet ending, but my favourite thing is John's reaction: very in character. And "Not ready to talk about it yet, Sherlock": simply perfect!

random_nexus August 19 2011, 22:24:50 UTC

Oh, this was interesting! I like and agree with how you portrayed John's reaction.
:D

treelight August 20 2011, 00:06:41 UTC

I love it, it's brilliant and very much like what our dear boys would do (or I would like them to do).

karadin August 20 2011, 01:14:55 UTC

the tense keeps switching in this fic, which is off putting.

poweroffunk August 20 2011, 21:27:51 UTC

yeah i noticed that after i posted, so i'm gonna have to fix that :(

capulet_rose August 20 2011, 03:39:11 UTC

I enjoyed this fic a lot (I'd love a sequel), but I totally had this song playing my head the entire time I was reading it. ;)

poweroffunk August 20 2011, 21:28:46 UTC

That song is COMPLETELY the reason why i called it what i did XD