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3247: My Fair Hufflepuff - Emilia Kaminska

May 16, 2014 22:11

I'm tired today for some reason, so today's entry is soething that was simple to read. Aka... it's not multiple stories and the plot is a classic cliché.

Here is a good How to Write a Fanfiction for todays link of the day.

TITLE: My Fair Hufflepuff
PERPETRATOR: BootstrapBoula
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o - pepper jack cheese, rating - toxic, ph - hufflepuff, e - polish, e - canadian

Comments 1

yemi_hikari May 17 2014, 23:26:07 UTC

Sorry... but "wasn't exactly perfect" isn't the same as "wasn't perfect". The writer's pretty much saying that her character is just a smidgen off being perfect with the wording she uses. Even if she didn't say that, there is no description of her physical appearance it seems outside of the fact she has nice boobs and the fact she thinks it is her best feature ( ... )