3326: POTTER PLOTTERS: see entry

[pottersues]

I've managed to find seven fics for the love triangle pairing for Harry between Hermione and Ginny, or any other combination.

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TITLE: POTTER PLOTTERS
PERPETRATOR: 50 shades of Christian
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[afleur_de_lis]

Is this person serious? I suppose being a troll means that you don't have much in way of brains.

Alright, so in this story... we have Harry who has sex with every girl at Hogwarts and uses them horribly because they are just that: girls. Then as payment, the girls get together and decide to punish Harry by becoming what he thinks of them (sluts), and toys with him?

I am not even going to mention characterisation in this entry. It isn't worth it if everybody who reads this thing can see that they are out of character anyway.

Honestly, if somebody wants to make a story that is a PWP. The least you can do as the author is make sure that the story makes sense, the characters are in character and that the story's format was an actual story.

[fonset]

The length of this person's stories is indeed something which caught my eye as well; they are all under a thousand words. Not that this is all that bad, but if you aren't going for a poem or a very brief one-shot (with in-character behaviour), you're probably going to need more words to at least make the thing believable and offer some sort of explanation for what is happening.
Maybe Harry used sex as a way of overcoming grief? Because right now, I see no reason for him to behave in this way, much less the reaction from the other characters, or even the fact that the girls agreed to sleep with him in the first place.

[fonset]

If this person isn't trolling, she certainly has an interesting fanfic history of shipping people who have no chemestry whatsoever. Ginny x Draco (because their families would absolutely love to join up), Draco x Hermione (I don't think I even need to go into this one), Rosalie x Jacob (because these two certainly liked eachother.. *coughcough*), I suppose this kind of fic is to be expected. I read the Twilight one, and the author barely tries to make it believable (not to mention that I got disturbed when bestiality was mentioned).

In case this isn't a troll, I would suggest the author do some research into believable plots. You can't just go about changing every characters personality when it's FAN fiction, indicating that you have to at least follow the original author's rules, or you better have a damn good reason not to do this. (i.e. a good explaination.)

[yemi_hikari]

So... looking at their fics... there is one pairing Edmund and Susan together and the writer ends the storing with the line, "although nothing's impossible in Narnia". The stories are pretty bad.