Mar 24, 2014 22:14
Here is day seven.
Today's doll is a
steampunk doll.
TITLE:
The Video CameraPERPETRATOR:
WhereTheBerriesBloomSUE-O-METER:
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sue - pansy parkinson,
rating - toxic,
sue - parvati patil,
sue - luna lovegood,
sue - fleur delacour,
sue - ginny weasley,
sue - lavender brown,
sue - minerva mcgonagal,
sue - cho chang,
sue - padma parvati,
sue - hermione granger
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OOC on all accounts, although that's less because the characterisation is inaccurate as it is non-existent. I have no problem with PWP, but for God's sake post it in the appropriate place and make an effort to write actual characters rather than objects. There's nothing erotic about just writing the bare mechanics.
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I've come across only one writer I can think of where the writing was pretty good on FFN and when I explained that they could get in trouble for MA material they started moving said material over to another site. The ones that post MA material aren't the only ones who whine about themselves being censored and how much their work is an art form. I'd say only 1% of the rule breaking stuff is truly creative, truly artistic... though it seems to be a bit higher with RPF, but not by much.
Fact: If you cared about your work and do consider it artistic and creative you would either make it compliant with the rules or you would find a venue that it fits.
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First, I highly doubt that Ron would abuse Hermione in this way. I always view Ron as being in awe at Hermione's intellect than anything else. He wouldn't want that piece of Hermione to become non-existent.
Not only is Ron's character off, but the others as well. It's like the author found their names in a book and copied and pasted them into a scenario that doesn't even make any sense. Sure, Hermione and Ginny are a couple... but at least show the relationship while they were married to other characters. I take it that they are cheating on their husbands in this work?
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And yes... they're cheating on their husbands in this as is Fluer. Tonks is supposed to be dead, and I can't see them interacting with Pansy of all people. McGonagall also has her professional pride.
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Fleur loves her husband though. She wouldn't do this to Bill. I hope Tonks isn't cheating on Remus if she is in this story.
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I don't think you can really do PWP when you're changing the bahaviours up this much. I'm pretty sure you owe the readers some kind of explanation as for why their favourite(?) characters are acting so much out of character..
Also, I'm on indigoneutrino's side here, I don't get why authors would risk their accounts when posting stories like this to fanfiction.. Though I have found some good stories which are also MA, but those weren't in the HP section.
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Some honestly don't realize there is a borderline, some honestly think that M is 18+. Most think though think it is all right to rebel against an establishment they falsely believe censors their creativity.
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