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[pottersues]

I've featured something from this Suethor recently. No, they weren't sent in by the same person. There has also been talk on the other entry as well about this one.

TITLE: Tantalizing Passion of an Unkempt Soul
PERPETRATOR: ImagineTheMist
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Comments

[yemi_hikari]

The first thing I'm going to ask is why her mother would "know this day would come but wanted to prevent it any way she knew how". By the time this child was two Voldemort was labeled as dead and everyone believed he was dead. He then remained dead until she turned sixteen. Since her mother couldn't have known the mother couldn't have given her a potion to prevent her from feeling aroused. Even if her mother could have I wonder if such a potion could be achieved and if it was what kind of health implications it has. On top of this I have to ask about the girl's monthly cycle. In the long run I don't see her not knowing about sex

[vampmissedith]

Yeah, age of sexual consent is eighteen (though of course, most people have sex before then). Still, writing something because you can isn't a reason to anything. I know people younger than seventeen who write smut better than this crap

[yemi_hikari]

I'm wondering if the writer thinks that making her character naive about the whole thing means that it isn't rape and that because she doesn't say no and just goes along with it that it isn't rape. However... since the character herself has the mind of a child there is no consent given even if she says yes by the mere fact she doesn't understand or comprehend what is going on. The age of consent becomes mute via laws. Of course... the writer also happens to be having Draco marry at the age of sixteen before he is able to legally consent himself. (But oh... they haven't had sex yet, so it can't possibly count... may be crossing the writers mind.)

We have a case where a seventeen year old has discovered the subject of sex and think anything relating to sex is the most amazing thing ever.

[vampmissedith]

It's also disturbing in that they force her to be eaten out by Narcissa. Voldemort had already shown her what happens when you disobey. That is definitely coercion, and if I recall, Iris was scared or uncomfortable or something

[beacon80]

... Ignoring... everything else, I'm left wondering: Why the hell are the Death Eaters bothering to procure "arranged marriages" like this?

[yemi_hikari]

I think it comes down to the writer not realizing that even raciest have some kind of moral standards and that they are very much aristocratic when it comes to the whole Pureblood thing.

[afleur_de_lis]

I was going to say the same thing as yemi_hikari below, but as she said the very thing that I've been thinking, repeating it wouldn't be necessary

[vampmissedith]

In her other sex story (which you saw) her character doesn't even have a name, and serves no other purpose than to be in a three way with Snape and Draco.

She clearly just writes her OCs not as characters, but as objects. It's really gross.

[afleur_de_lis]

I really, really, really, really want to leave the author a critique about her characters and the storylines, but I am afraid that it will start a war between myself, the author and the reviewers of this story.

The way the female OCs are used in these stories, yes they do serve as objects and not individuals. It is really gross, methinks.

[pottersues]

While the policy on Pottersues is that we don't like it when stories disapear I'm not going to hold it against anyone who wants to report this one or the other one as NC-17 is against the site rules on the pit

I was curious to find out how people keep running into this writer and did a google search and found her tumbler page. Apparently she found out that she other story was featured here.

[vampmissedith]

Yeah, she also was sending people links to her fic anonymously and started harassing people who like, either didn't review it or said something unpleasant on their tumblrs right after she sent the ask. There's not much on her tumblr except some whiny crap anyway.

[pottersues]

I found her tumbler and was thinking of the politiest way to say what I found and that was it. There is more though. She posted a link to her story Ménage à Trois and ended up being flagged by someone so that the admins decided that her posts wouldn't show up under the tags she used. She then complains that she linked to a story that amounted to the M rating and not nudity. Not only is her story not M... it is MA... her story also contains nudity and words that are not appropriate. She also found out her fic was featured on Pottersues.

[afleur_de_lis]

I found out about her tumblr when she spammed random people with a link to her stories and telling these individuals to read and review. One of my fandom friends was one of the unlucky ones that is being trolled by this one. I recently found a post by said friend complaining about it and providing a link to what was being done.

In all honesty, I believe this one thinks that she is the greatest writer to ever grace the site of FFN. Judging by her posts in that regards, she has one high horse that she can't dismount off of safely.

I saw that post about Pottersues. Can't take critique at all, and enjoys the rank of being a drama-monger. She doesn't even have the courage to post her objections here. Though, I have to say that I literally laughed when she said that she got asked by a Russian translator to have that story translated in said language.

[yemi_hikari]

Why didn't she move to America? No... seriously. You would think that moving to America would be the smartest thing to do.