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[pottersues]

TITLE: The Human Phoenix
PERPETRATOR: Beautiful dreaming warrior
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Comments

[afleur_de_lis]

This story is rather poorly written. Everything about it makes me shake my head at it

[yemi_hikari]

The term she's using isn't "element" but "elemental" To quote the Dungeons and Dragons wiki "an elemental is a being composed of one of the four classical elements: air, earth, fire, or water" so a Phoenix can be classified as an elemental. This is used out of character in D&D though, in character for the game they're referred to as their particular species and not as an elemental. The term elemental is left for the minor creatures that people summon. Actually, in most fantasy material the term elemental is used to refer to minor summoned creatures or used to classify things. So she is using the term "elemental" wrong.

[afleur_de_lis]

Didn't know that, so I am glad that you explained. I guess that a phoenix can be considered an elemental, but in this text it doesn't make much sense.

However, the one thing that I am most confused about is whether this character is supposed to be a phoenix or just have that elemental blood in her. I mean, the title suggests that she has "phoenix blood" in her, while from the author's description, it just states that she is an "elemental".

[yemi_hikari]

That usually means fire person and not someone with Pheonix Blood.

[darth_gojira]

Another Hawaiian sue? Insert "Negative Mana" or "throw her in the volcano" joke here

Wow.

WOW

This one isn't even pretending to be an ordinary OC or that their character fits in Harry Potter

[beacon80]

Now, I'm not like any other pureblood woman who only cares about status and if you insinuate that about me i cannot be responsible for your injuries.
Yes, because Molly, Ginny, and Neville's gran care so much about status. And no, someone implying that you care about blood purity or anything like that does not excuse you attacking them.

[yemi_hikari]

On top of this she isn't even a pureblood, she's a half-breed.