The title... o.k. First, there is no such thing as magical anatomy. The titles that play with this particular phrase substitute the word human with another noun like vampire, or elf, or... well... you get the picture. Second, the title is very telling. Reading the fic I find it kind of disturbing that these girls have been planning to have sex with the guys since their third year and it is now their sixth. Do they not have lives beyond just this? Then there is the fact the older students get their own rooms that include kitchenettes. PLEASE! Canon says otherwise! GREAT way to make it clear that you wrote this for wish fulfillment purposes by providing your character with everything she needs to snog the guy. Hogwarts is NOT a college people!
People seem to conveniently forget that boys can't get up to the girl's dorm. And that there are other girls in there. They don't have their own rooms.
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