“Avana is in year one and she was born in Azkaban because in my world Rodolphus and Bellatrix can see each other sometimes or they share a cell and well... I don't want to explain the rest!”
I wish Suethor's wouldn't call it their world just as much as I wish they wouldn't call the character's their characters. It's only your world and your characters if it is original to you. On top of this she could have made it so the character actually worked within the world easily, but instead didn't choose to do so. That actually surprises me, as this is one of the easiest things to not have to worry about making a mistake on.
Is it really necessary to put {Flashback} and {Flash back ends} around the flashback, then italicize it, then underline it as well. I mean, come on. We get it; it's a flashback. Now stop making the page look like an eyesore.
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I wish Suethor's wouldn't call it their world just as much as I wish they wouldn't call the character's their characters. It's only your world and your characters if it is original to you. On top of this she could have made it so the character actually worked within the world easily, but instead didn't choose to do so. That actually surprises me, as this is one of the easiest things to not have to worry about making a mistake on.
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"Avana LeStrange." She said and they were friends.
Ha ha! one two three four FIVE words exchanged and they were friends. Hm... how believable -_-
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