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[pottersues]

Here is day fourteen.

Day M - Maximum Ride This book is about six kids who have been experimented on so that they share genetic traits with birds.

TITLE: Split In Three: Maximum RideHarry Potter Percy Jackson crossover
PERPETRATOR: BlackPheonix666
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Comments

[0telepsychola]

I choose to believe this is a troll based on the author's name, the errors and a desperate need to stay sane.

[yemi_hikari]

I don't think the name is enough to call the author a troll. I've seen a lot of writers who have very similar names.

[0telepsychola]

Let me have my desperate dreams.

[afleur_de_lis]

-snorts-

The things people come up with when writing fanfiction. This story sounds... very strange. I mean seriously, genetic testing? The character is as sue as you can get. Surely if she were an experiment those scientist would keep her in the lab right? That is if she survived...

[0telepsychola]

Actually the scientists/escape from the lab thing is very similar to RP plot lines people run on Neopets. Not even kidding.

[yemi_hikari]

Ahh... Neopets. I haven't logged on for a couple years now. I enjoyed the site a lot more when they were coming out with complex plots that made me think and made me work really hard. They may have come out with one since I've been on, but I don't feel like checking just to find myself disappointed.

[0telepsychola]

You missed the plot to destroy Faerieland, then. Which due to player votes, actually worked. They rebuilt in on the ground in a valley afterwards, but there was a while where all the faeries were turning to stone and nothing from Faerieland was available.

[anonymous]

Quote from Chapter 5:

"And I was all like WTF, the ceiling talks."

LOL. It is for this reason that the first-person narrative is a dangerous thing.

[hotaruofkonoha]

Honestly, the books are quite an exercise in how dangerous first-person narration can be. (And also why James Patterson needs to go talk to some teenagers before trying to write in the point of view of one.)

[pottersues]

Or his co-writers need to.

[yemi_hikari]

Yeah, but this one series is one that he seems to not have had co-writers on.