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[pottersues]

Here is one of the entries I've had written up a long time ago, which explains why I thought we should have another Sue tagged with the Hawaiian ethnicity tag.

TITLE: Easier to Lie
PERPETRATOR: DeathCabGirl21
SUE-O-METER:

Comments

[camillevwatson]

It's not too bad, the premise is kinda weird, a bit of the dialogue is just unrealistic and I'm not quite sure what's up with Harry's "new found powers" at the begining, but it doesn't seem too bad. Harry seems in character enough, though I suppose we'll see what happens.

[yemi_hikari]

It's discontinued. Looking at it, it is more along the lines of original fiction rather then fanfiction.

[camillevwatson]

I can't say I'm surprised. Maybe the author switched to writing original fiction, that'd be interesting to see.