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[pottersues]

Here is RavenclawKatt's other fanfic. As I said yesterday, the summary shouted out to me big time. Also, I've gotten through February of 2004, so 65% of the older links are fixed.

TITLE: The Dark Mark
PERPETRATOR: RavenclawKAtt
SUE-O-METER:

Comments

[sapnish]

"Alexia!" He yelled. My parents looked up glared then kept talking to the twins.

He parents really hate her. If that's how they react to her despite only meeting about twice a year, I can't imagine how these people would live under the same roof...

[yemi_hikari]

You missed their hair, eye and skin color Pottersues. It is right there in the sample.

Why do I think Voldemort is going to be reincarnated in one of the twins. Which flies in the face of canon big time.

[darth_gojira]

It's nice to see a Sue that admits she's evil and should be destroyed.

[castleofcolours]

I read the first chapter of this story and thought that it was odd how the Dark Mark would be on a person since birth. At first I thought that the Dark Mark was put on the child right after birth because some of the pureblooded wizarding families are weird that way but I then thought about how it wasn't very plausible for that as Draco didn't get it until he was in sixth year at Hogwarts.

Then I read the first chapter again in my native tongue because I really wanted to get it and found that the Death Mark was passed down genetically. I don't think that is very possible is it? I mean Draco's parents were Death Eaters and a couple of other children's parents were Death Eaters and they didn't have a Death Mark genetically passed on to them.

It isn't something that you'd get! It isn't a genetic disease or anything and it definitely is not in the genetics of their parents.

Sending a review to the author... again.

[yemi_hikari]

I'd be more apt to believe that she had a birthmark that looked like a Death Mark, but not all three of the children.