While that is technically possible allowing for very premature births, it's highly unlikely. I doubt that the Suethor has actually thought about it at all.
"StupdGenius4Eva" is not a good username. It's just way too easy to do this to it: StupdGenius4Eva. Which pretty much sums up the fic in general.
The Suethor's profile says she is WAY younger then fifteen and asks if we believe it. Considering this kind of mistake, no... I'm not surprised that she's younger then fifteen.
"How come you joining in now? We don't usually have exchange students."
"Our parents died and we don't have any relatives. So, now we've moved to the house we inherited with our new foster parents."
This is like Neville introducing himself by saying "I live with my grandma because a psycho drove my parents crazy. This is so cool!".
I once found a senior woman crying in a public bathroom when I was about fifteen. I tried to comfort her, but then she yelled something like "HOW CAN I? MY FAMILY HATES ME, I LOST MY HOME, I HAVE NO JOB OR MONEY...TELL ME HOW THINGS CAN GET BETTER?!". I just stood there in silence, not knowing what to say, and she stormed out. That experience still haunts me, but that's pretty much the only believable way I can picture a person bumping all of their problems into a complete stranger.
Which only proves said situation wouldn't be a comfortable one. I mean, even the one I can think of wouldn't be very comfortable either. I'm thinking of some of the special needs I've heard of where a person can't control telling people that kind of stuff. And the really creepy thing... some of them do it with a smile on their faces.
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Kim is James' younger sister by eight months.
While that is technically possible allowing for very premature births, it's highly unlikely. I doubt that the Suethor has actually thought about it at all.
"StupdGenius4Eva" is not a good username. It's just way too easy to do this to it: StupdGenius4Eva. Which pretty much sums up the fic in general.
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"Our parents died and we don't have any relatives. So, now we've moved to the house we inherited with our new foster parents."
This is like Neville introducing himself by saying "I live with my grandma because a psycho drove my parents crazy. This is so cool!".
I once found a senior woman crying in a public bathroom when I was about fifteen. I tried to comfort her, but then she yelled something like "HOW CAN I? MY FAMILY HATES ME, I LOST MY HOME, I HAVE NO JOB OR MONEY...TELL ME HOW THINGS CAN GET BETTER?!". I just stood there in silence, not knowing what to say, and she stormed out. That experience still haunts me, but that's pretty much the only believable way I can picture a person bumping all of their problems into a complete stranger.
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Good lord, they just met! These Sues are getting more forward.
That or she knocked on the door and then punched him in the face.
"Sure!" Aston-lookalike chirped (yes, chirped)."
Tee hee :D I actually think chirped is fine as a dialogue tag, but the reiteration made me read the rest of the sample in a Tweety Bird voice.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oxzuEM8puNQ
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