0240: My Lily: Narcissa's story - Narcissa Evelyn Black and Lily Evans

[pottersues]

Rarely-Sued Canon Character Week, Day Six... we've got Lesbians!

(But first, I must share this. I'm an atheist for a reason.)

TITLE: My Lily: Narcissa's story
PERPETRATOR: Sapphic Priestess

SUE-O-METER:

Comments

[niav]

My God that's bad. I mean REALLY bad.

[wenelda]

*Rolls eyes* you know, even if she did everything right with the grammar and whatnot... to me, personally, a fic loses its appeal when characters that don't curse in canon start cursing up a storm. Like Lucius. As far as I know he doesn't curse in the books anywhere. I really don't think he would use that sort of language, simply because it's not like someone of his background to do so. Again, that's just me.

[sporkyspazkat]

I agree...it's called out of characterness and it's very annoying

A pregnancy spell?

[sporkyspazkat]

WOw...that's a first...i think we should all give her a round of applause for her...um...creativity...

[useless_espers]

I'm so sorry I showed that link to you. I thought I was in hell for a moment. But no, James giving Snape a bath. ::sobs::

[almostpretty]

::lies twitching on the floor for awhile::

[useless_espers]

I am doing the same. Is there such thing as women's rights in the wizard world?

[kirixchi]

Oh, may I please, PLEASE steal that Icon. I LOVE it!

[zaki]

OHMIGOD, that icon is the funniest ever! I can almost hear him screaming: AAh! OW! Aah! Burns! Aah! Sporks! Aah!