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0022: A Second Glance - Lily and Serenia Evans

Apr 26, 2003 21:17

You know, this is really starting to depress me... I had been under the naive assumption that finding truly horrible sues would be at least something of a challenge... but no, I just bring up the Harry Potter section at the Pit of Voles, and there they are, staring me in the face on the front page.

Today, we have a truly bizarre Lily-Sue.

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pw - woobie/cry for me, be - blue eyes, jr - royalty, y - marauder era, rating - toxic, sue - lily potter, nts - name is serena/serinity, pp - made up place, ct - angel (part), am - super strength, sw-o - sparklypoos, b - speshul figure, b - speshul eyes, sw-o - bitchiwitch, rom - none, bh - golden hair, ct - fairy/fae (full), bp - wings, pa - au - alternate backstory mangled, pc - twin and/or such, pt - death of parent(s), related to the evans, b - speshul hair, b - gem like eyes

Comments 33

sistermaynard October 9 2007, 02:29:31 UTC

"How about as a fat, shy, know-it-all, bookworms. No body likes those types of people."
As someone who was certainly all of the above except fat until high school and is still the latter three to some extent, I second all of the comments about death- I propose the death of a thousand cuts with rusty butter knives, salt, and lemon juice.

anonymous March 6 2008, 08:24:17 UTC

Pssh, you fat people always get defensive about stuff.

Anyway, this was when Lily was in her first year right? Harry was born in 1980... How old are the Simpsons anyway? 0_0 :P

tobiasfliesfree December 28 2009, 16:02:06 UTC

The Simpsons premiered December 17, 1989, so long after Lily and James were dead.

artemistrouble September 1 2009, 10:50:05 UTC

Everyone in this story is a Sue. Except for Peter Pettigrew who is a target.

Sorry for commenting on something so old.

anonymous April 26 2010, 17:45:11 UTC

Despite the 'fat and ugly' comments and all the sue-thing, I think the suethor can be rescued if she practices, finds better arguments and teams up with a beta because that's the best prose (from a suethor) I've seen in this site. Even if it tastes like diabetes and english is not my mother language...

Zonko is in Hogsmeade, not in Diagon Alley!!!

By the way, why naming her Serena? I mean, if it were something like 'Millie' it might work, because 'Lily and Millie'... at least with the same number of syllabs: 'Lily and Helen', 'Lily and Rose', 'Lily and you-get-my-point'...

anonymous September 7 2012, 22:01:02 UTC

"How about as a fat, shy, know-it-all, bookworms. Nobody likes those type of people." she replied, getting out the materials.

Not all bookworms are like that! Screw the law, that bitch shall pay!