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TITLE: Talk About Forbidden Love!
PERPETRATOR: Depp's-Still-Doll You have at least 5 different Mary-Sues spanning 4 fandoms.
SUE-O-METER:
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FULL NAME: Serenity Gooding
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: "long platinum blond hair was as shiny as ever"
EYES: "gorgeous grey eyes glimmered in the candle light"
MARKINGS: none described
POSSESSIONS: an "emerald green" snake, named Scythia and an egagement ring from Draco: "on either side of the diamond was a small moonstone".
ORIGIN: Has been going to Hogwarts all along.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is friends with the Trio. Some one (Draco) grabs her and pulls her into the cupboard, where she resists momentarily, but then makes out with him when he kisses her the way she likes it. I really wish I was making that up. He continues to sexually harass her and she puts up a front and then enjoys it. They engage in some verbal sparring, to cover their attraction. Then Professor Slughorn pairs all of the class up with members of the opposite sex and makes them drink a plot device "Lust Potion". Serenity jumps Draco and they kiss "passionately", and then they have sex. They have sex all week until the potion wears off. When it does, again, she is angry and rejects him, but then gives in. Hermione is furious that her friend would go out with a racist asshole, and slaps Serenity. This is never resolved, and she just goes back to snogging Draco. While Draco is trying to kill Dumbledore, and failing, he asks Serenity to marry him at Christmas. She says "Yes!", and then asks him "Are these genuine?", and he responds "Only the best" which does not answer her question. They could be the best fakes.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Her beauty "was at its peak". Can speak Parseltounge. She has "many of the qualities of all the houses, except for Slytherin". Can see into the future and/or lives in a vivid fantasy world.
NOTES: Wow, this should be an example for "Wish-fulfillment 101"
SAMPLE:
Serenity couldn't control herself. The lust potion maximized her infatuation with the irresistible Draco Malfoy. She ran her fingers through his hair as she kissed him.
"Do you know that you have the best hair?"
"I do know."
"And that smirk! It's so...sexy."
"I know."
"Oh, Draco! You're so strong!" She said as she stroked his stomach.
Serenity looked almost drunk. As a Gryffindor, she should have been just crushing, but her secret feelings, well, she couldn't have looked more filled with lust even if she tried.
"Let's finish this in my room," Draco said sexily.
"Oh, Draco, you bad boy!" Serenity said kissing him yet again.
They stopped being all over each other just to get to Draco's room. They immediately started snogging and walking to the bed. They flopped down and Malfoy parted.
"I hate these school uniforms."
"Oh, Draco, take it off! Take it all off!"
He tore off the robes and Serenity helped unbutton his shirt. They stripped themselves of every item of clothing. Serenity, so consumed by lust, barely registered the stab of pain that was the end of her time as a virgin. Her conscious never noticed that her innocence was stripped from her and was never able to be regained. She was oblivious of the blood that began to seep into the sheets. They eventually fell asleep making love.
Serenity woke to see Draco lying on top of her. She kissed him, and he woke with a start. "Whoa!" he said spotting her breasts.
"What? Don't you like what you see?" she asked, faking innocence. She had a malicious tone in her voice.
Malfoy remembered the great night and smiled. "You have no idea."
The whole week was like heaven to Draco. They had sex all the time, but Draco wasn't completely stupid. He knew it wouldn't last forever.
Exactly one week after she had drunk the potion, she was less excitable with their "fun." That night, he thought that he should get one last round in before she snapped out of it. He was completely naked and was half way through undressing her when she started screaming.
"What's wrong, baby?" he said, unaware that the trance was broken.
"What the bloody hell do you think you're doing, you fucked up bastard?"
"I was hoping that this wouldn't end so...suddenly." He realized that she hated him again.
"You thought that you'd- Ugh!" She couldn't take this pervert any longer.
"Before you kill me, there's something you should know. I-We already...."
"Are you serious?" Serenity shrieked. She lost it she pulled out her wand. "We already- Ugh! That's it! Cruci-"
Draco had pushed away her wand arm and started kissing her. Pulling away, he said, "Now tell me you-"
"Avada Keda-" she screamed with a sneer. Malfoy was again kissing her. Serenity had her wand at the side of his head. "Avada Ke-" she thought. "Oh! Who am I kidding? Malfoy may be - well, he is - a damned pervert, but he's still so… What? He fucked me, now I'm gonna fuck him! Avada...avad...av...Oh! Screw this!"
She threw the wand aside and kissed back passionately.
Draco stopped, astonished. Once he realized that it was a true kiss, he started kissing back. He licked her lower lip for permission. Her mouth opened slightly, granting access. Serenity opened her mouth wider after a while. Their tongues started exploring each other's mouths.
Out of respect, Draco started to wiggle back into his boxers. Serenity let him know she appreciated the gesture by quickly kissing harder, then softer. He told her he got the message by lowering his mouth to her jaw, then neck. As he started to suck, she moaned with pleasure. He smirked upon hearing it.
After fifteen more minutes, they stopped, catching their breath.
"So, I guess this means we're kind of together," Serenity said awestruck.
"I guess so."
"Well, I guess I should get back to my common room." She grabbed her robe, vest, and wand. Serenity then buttoned her shirt back up and headed for the door.
"Serenity?"
"Yes, Ma- Draco?"
"I love you."
Serenity paused, unsure and afraid of his suddenness. She stuttered a little, but when she realized she couldn't speak, she left.
The next week, every one noticed their behavior and put two and two together. Unfortunately, not every one was excited about them dating.
TITLE: Talk About Forbidden Love!
PERPETRATOR: Depp's-Still-Doll You have at least 5 different Mary-Sues spanning 4 fandoms.
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
FULL NAME: Serenity Gooding
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: "long platinum blond hair was as shiny as ever"
EYES: "gorgeous grey eyes glimmered in the candle light"
MARKINGS: none described
POSSESSIONS: an "emerald green" snake, named Scythia and an egagement ring from Draco: "on either side of the diamond was a small moonstone".
ORIGIN: Has been going to Hogwarts all along.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is friends with the Trio. Some one (Draco) grabs her and pulls her into the cupboard, where she resists momentarily, but then makes out with him when he kisses her the way she likes it. I really wish I was making that up. He continues to sexually harass her and she puts up a front and then enjoys it. They engage in some verbal sparring, to cover their attraction. Then Professor Slughorn pairs all of the class up with members of the opposite sex and makes them drink a plot device "Lust Potion". Serenity jumps Draco and they kiss "passionately", and then they have sex. They have sex all week until the potion wears off. When it does, again, she is angry and rejects him, but then gives in. Hermione is furious that her friend would go out with a racist asshole, and slaps Serenity. This is never resolved, and she just goes back to snogging Draco. While Draco is trying to kill Dumbledore, and failing, he asks Serenity to marry him at Christmas. She says "Yes!", and then asks him "Are these genuine?", and he responds "Only the best" which does not answer her question. They could be the best fakes.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Her beauty "was at its peak". Can speak Parseltounge. She has "many of the qualities of all the houses, except for Slytherin". Can see into the future and/or lives in a vivid fantasy world.
NOTES: Wow, this should be an example for "Wish-fulfillment 101"
SAMPLE:
Serenity couldn't control herself. The lust potion maximized her infatuation with the irresistible Draco Malfoy. She ran her fingers through his hair as she kissed him.
"Do you know that you have the best hair?"
"I do know."
"And that smirk! It's so...sexy."
"I know."
"Oh, Draco! You're so strong!" She said as she stroked his stomach.
Serenity looked almost drunk. As a Gryffindor, she should have been just crushing, but her secret feelings, well, she couldn't have looked more filled with lust even if she tried.
"Let's finish this in my room," Draco said sexily.
"Oh, Draco, you bad boy!" Serenity said kissing him yet again.
They stopped being all over each other just to get to Draco's room. They immediately started snogging and walking to the bed. They flopped down and Malfoy parted.
"I hate these school uniforms."
"Oh, Draco, take it off! Take it all off!"
He tore off the robes and Serenity helped unbutton his shirt. They stripped themselves of every item of clothing. Serenity, so consumed by lust, barely registered the stab of pain that was the end of her time as a virgin. Her conscious never noticed that her innocence was stripped from her and was never able to be regained. She was oblivious of the blood that began to seep into the sheets. They eventually fell asleep making love.
Serenity woke to see Draco lying on top of her. She kissed him, and he woke with a start. "Whoa!" he said spotting her breasts.
"What? Don't you like what you see?" she asked, faking innocence. She had a malicious tone in her voice.
Malfoy remembered the great night and smiled. "You have no idea."
The whole week was like heaven to Draco. They had sex all the time, but Draco wasn't completely stupid. He knew it wouldn't last forever.
Exactly one week after she had drunk the potion, she was less excitable with their "fun." That night, he thought that he should get one last round in before she snapped out of it. He was completely naked and was half way through undressing her when she started screaming.
"What's wrong, baby?" he said, unaware that the trance was broken.
"What the bloody hell do you think you're doing, you fucked up bastard?"
"I was hoping that this wouldn't end so...suddenly." He realized that she hated him again.
"You thought that you'd- Ugh!" She couldn't take this pervert any longer.
"Before you kill me, there's something you should know. I-We already...."
"Are you serious?" Serenity shrieked. She lost it she pulled out her wand. "We already- Ugh! That's it! Cruci-"
Draco had pushed away her wand arm and started kissing her. Pulling away, he said, "Now tell me you-"
"Avada Keda-" she screamed with a sneer. Malfoy was again kissing her. Serenity had her wand at the side of his head. "Avada Ke-" she thought. "Oh! Who am I kidding? Malfoy may be - well, he is - a damned pervert, but he's still so… What? He fucked me, now I'm gonna fuck him! Avada...avad...av...Oh! Screw this!"
She threw the wand aside and kissed back passionately.
Draco stopped, astonished. Once he realized that it was a true kiss, he started kissing back. He licked her lower lip for permission. Her mouth opened slightly, granting access. Serenity opened her mouth wider after a while. Their tongues started exploring each other's mouths.
Out of respect, Draco started to wiggle back into his boxers. Serenity let him know she appreciated the gesture by quickly kissing harder, then softer. He told her he got the message by lowering his mouth to her jaw, then neck. As he started to suck, she moaned with pleasure. He smirked upon hearing it.
After fifteen more minutes, they stopped, catching their breath.
"So, I guess this means we're kind of together," Serenity said awestruck.
"I guess so."
"Well, I guess I should get back to my common room." She grabbed her robe, vest, and wand. Serenity then buttoned her shirt back up and headed for the door.
"Serenity?"
"Yes, Ma- Draco?"
"I love you."
Serenity paused, unsure and afraid of his suddenness. She stuttered a little, but when she realized she couldn't speak, she left.
The next week, every one noticed their behavior and put two and two together. Unfortunately, not every one was excited about them dating.