My first reaction to this was "What the hell was all that about?" I am not at all familiar with Naruto so the idea of Harry having a "love symbol" on his forehead really made me giggle.
Also, I've only seen Naruto maybe two times maximum, but Neville as Sasuke? Really?
Ugh me too ... k, I've seen maybe five episodes of Naruto, but I think Draco would have been a better Sasuke if ANY of them absolutely HAD to be Naruto characters.
And I'm totally with you on the prose aspect. None of it makes sense!!!
Okay, Gaara of the Sand has one of the tailed monsters. Specifically, the one-tailed raccoon. This gives him power over sand, but the raccoon's dark personality haunts him. I'm still not sure what that sentence is supposed to mean, because it implies Harry has always been haunted by a raccoon spirit, just not as badly.
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I was pronouncing it to myself going "Mag-O-nee-gull? WTF?
Can't wait to see Draco's sexy no jutsu...
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Yeah, right.
"Snape hen said,"
Snape Hen? One of the most throught-provoking spelling errors here.
"you shall regain your old looks and memories back"
And, apparently, personalities too.
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Who knew?
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I am not at all familiar with Naruto so the idea of Harry having a "love symbol" on his forehead really made me giggle.
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This fic made me laugh way too much. *is supposed to study for a test*
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I have absolutely no idea what just happened.
Also, I've only seen Naruto maybe two times maximum, but Neville as Sasuke? Really?
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Ugh me too ... k, I've seen maybe five episodes of Naruto, but I think Draco would have been a better Sasuke if ANY of them absolutely HAD to be Naruto characters.
And I'm totally with you on the prose aspect. None of it makes sense!!!
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