1996: ||The Prince of Snakes|| Draco Malfoy ||And His Princess|| - Vindella "Vin, Vinny, Vindel" Fur

Oct 17, 2008 14:05

Sue #1!

TITLE: ||The Prince of Snakes|| Draco Malfoy ||And His Princess||
PERPETRATOR: MysteryRockerChild
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)

FULL NAME: Vindella "Vin, Vinny, Vindel" Furiou
SPECIES: Pureblood
EYES: green
HAIR:"dark brown, short and too my shoulders. Most of the tim I keep it up in a sloppy bun."
MARKINGS: 16, 5'4", vanilla perfume
POSSESSIONS: "I enjoy music by CKY, HIM, Linkin Park, Rob Zombie, Dream Evil, and many other rock bands such as Blink 182, Green Day and Sum 41." Items: "Tysa, in the shape of a purple star pendent", a black kitten. Clothes: "black pj pants with blue stars on them and a black tee shirt", "a pair of blue jeans, a black zip-up HIM hoodie and a red shirt", "a blood red silk nightgown that fell to my knees with black lace around the bottom", a black cotton robe and black slippers. Sue-siblings named after Greek gods.

ORIGIN: A Pureblood Family. Has been going to Hogwarts all along.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is in Slytherin. Adores Draco. He adores her back. Awww.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: "I come up with snappy comebacks". Do you want a hero biscuit.

NOTES: Blah quizilla sue.


SAMPLE:

Your POV
I awoke with a start. What a horrible nightmare. I stood. I was wearing a blood red silk nightgown that fell to my knees with black lace around the bottom. I pulled my black cotton robe on and slipped my matching black slippers own. Slowly I made my way to the common room and opened the balcony door. I saw Draco, but said nothing. I stepped to the rail, my arms crossed over my chest as I looked out across the horizon where land met the night sky. "Why are you out here so late?" I heard Draco ask. I turned, as a wind came. My arms dropped as my hair whipped around with my robe and nightgown. I smiled. "I could ask you the same question, Draco. But you'd probly answer the same thing I'm about to. Couldn't sleep." He stood, leaning on the rail looking at me. "Yup." Was all he said. Why is he so quite, why is he just staring. And why doesn't he just kiss me? I sighed, and leaned on the railing with my elbows, bending over it slightly. "Vinny..." he began, but stopped. Why did he sto- My thoughts came to a complete stop...

Oh...Oh...CLIFFHANGER!(R: You're kidding right?) Yes (R: Oh you dirty little...Wait. What?!) I was about to say, I could make it a cliffhanger. (R: NO PLEASE NO!) Alright. read on dear!
Draco's POV
She's out her with me. And for 6 years I've always wanted to tell her. But couldn't. It was never the right moment. Never the right time. Now it is. She looks so beautiful. I have to tell her. NOW. I drew in my breathe to calm my self and walked closer to her as she leaned over the railing a bit. "Vinny..." I began. She looked up. I never finished my sentance. I couldn't I had pulled her close to me and kissed her softly. Not a forced kiss. We pulled apart several brief seconds after, and she looked confused. She never liked me...never... My mind swirled with words such as those and it almost killed me. I slowly turned to walk away. At the door, my hand went to turn the knob. When I heard her speak. "Draco...Come here..." She whispered. I looked up, and turned. Her eyes were focused on me, almost as if she had a secret to tell me. I walked over, standing before her. Waiting for a judgement. My head was down, expecting her to yell. But it was met by her soft, tender hands. "Why...Why did you kiss me?" She asked, her voice still soft and in a whisper. I swallowed. It's now or never Draco. Now or never. Tell her. Just. Spit it out. Again I looked up, placing my own hand on hers, closing my eyes. "Because...I had to. And because since the first time I was in the train with you, I've always wanted to." I said simply. I opened my eyes and looked at her. "Draco, All you had to do was say so. And the moment you'd have asked, I would of kissed you." She whispered. I looked at her, completely confused. What was she saying? Does she...like me? My wishs and dreams were answered moments after that thought. I felt her place her other hand on my face and pull it down, so her lips could meet my own.
Your POV.
I had finally kissed him. After years of longing and yearning to feel his lips on my own, I finally hd kissed him. And it was great. I released Draco, only to feel him hug me. "Please, Tell me you'll be my girlfriend." His breathe was hot on my neck as he whispered into my ear. I smiled, inhaling his scent, and looked up kissing him again. And as soon as he kissed back, all was right in the world. We pulled apart and headed into the common room. We embraced again, and took our own ways, heading back to our own rooms. I slipped my slippers off and sat on my bed, looking at the floor. A smile was spread wide across my face. I heard the floor creak and looked to Eris. She bowed to me. "At last, The Prince has choosen his Princess." She said and stepped aside. Hades peered in aswell. Yes, he sneaks into my room at night so as we can plot things he next day. He too bowed and left. I smiled and went to sleep. The next morning I woke up and dressed. As soon as I reached the common room, Draco was at my side his arms around my waist and his lips pressed against mine. We pulled apart and smiled at each other. "Hello to you too, Mr. Malfoy." I said with a laugh. We turned and saw Eris and Hades. The were smiling. Hades snapped a photo and put the camera down on the table to his left. Then both of them bowed. "Hail the Prince of Snakes...And His Princess" the called. Many others looked at them and joined in. Draco smirked at the attention while I laughed. We walked out, hand in hand. Heading for breakfast. There we were met with Hades handing both of us a polaroid.

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