0001: Harry's New Love - Diana Charmers
TITLE: Harry's New Love
PERPETRATOR: Potter Pisces315
SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
WRITING: **
SUEAGE: ***
WRONGNESS: *
FULL NAME: Diana Charmers
SPECIES: Human/Witch
HAIR: "straight dirty blonde hair"
EYES: "brown almond-shaped eyes"
MARKINGS: None
POSESSIONS: An owl that looks exactly like Hedwig.
ORIGIN: Unexplained thus far
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She appears to live next door to the Dursleys.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Making Harry fall instantly in love with her
NOTES: This probably isn't a great Sue to start with... partly because I already posted the sucker in marysues and partly because it's so amazingly bland. It's rather sad, really, but there's not an ounce of originality present. I mean, when we've got Voldemort's gorgeous lovechild from New York who's a white phoenix animagus... at least then the author is trying.
Speaking of the author, her name is probably Diana. MoonAngel called her that in a review.
SAMPLE:
Harry couldn't fall asleep. The image of the girl he had met yesterday was stuck in his head. Her facial features where those of an angel's. Her straight dirty blonde hair and her brown almond shaped eyes made Harry fall in love. He had been sitting on the porch steps clearing his mind of thoughts, when this angelic-like girl came up to him.
"Pardon me, but is there a Mr. Harry Potter residing here?"
Harry, startled, said, "Y-yes. Uh, that would b-be me. M-may I help you?"
"Well, actually, this letter arrived at my house. I believe it's for you."
"Oh, thank you. You have lovely eyes," said Harry.
She laughed and said, "Why thank you, you're so sweet. I'm Diana Charmers, I live next door."
They shook hands. "Well, I'll see you Hogwarts Harry. Pleasure meeting you."
She walked over to her house. Harry thought to himself, "I think I'm in love" not knowing that Diana was thinking the same thing.
PERPETRATOR: Potter Pisces315
SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
WRITING: **
SUEAGE: ***
WRONGNESS: *
FULL NAME: Diana Charmers
SPECIES: Human/Witch
HAIR: "straight dirty blonde hair"
EYES: "brown almond-shaped eyes"
MARKINGS: None
POSESSIONS: An owl that looks exactly like Hedwig.
ORIGIN: Unexplained thus far
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She appears to live next door to the Dursleys.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Making Harry fall instantly in love with her
NOTES: This probably isn't a great Sue to start with... partly because I already posted the sucker in marysues and partly because it's so amazingly bland. It's rather sad, really, but there's not an ounce of originality present. I mean, when we've got Voldemort's gorgeous lovechild from New York who's a white phoenix animagus... at least then the author is trying.
Speaking of the author, her name is probably Diana. MoonAngel called her that in a review.
SAMPLE:
Harry couldn't fall asleep. The image of the girl he had met yesterday was stuck in his head. Her facial features where those of an angel's. Her straight dirty blonde hair and her brown almond shaped eyes made Harry fall in love. He had been sitting on the porch steps clearing his mind of thoughts, when this angelic-like girl came up to him.
"Pardon me, but is there a Mr. Harry Potter residing here?"
Harry, startled, said, "Y-yes. Uh, that would b-be me. M-may I help you?"
"Well, actually, this letter arrived at my house. I believe it's for you."
"Oh, thank you. You have lovely eyes," said Harry.
She laughed and said, "Why thank you, you're so sweet. I'm Diana Charmers, I live next door."
They shook hands. "Well, I'll see you Hogwarts Harry. Pleasure meeting you."
She walked over to her house. Harry thought to himself, "I think I'm in love" not knowing that Diana was thinking the same thing.