0121: Sakura's Hogworts Adventure - Lily Li
The past couple of days, the Sues have not been half bad... the most annoying thing about them has been the nagging question of why anybody would bother writing them in the first place. So let's have a real nasty one, shall we?
TITLE: Sakura's Hogworts Adventure
PERPETRATOR: Water Lily3 (the numbering begins!)
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Lily Li (that's right... the Sue is NOT Sakura)
SPECIES: Human/Witch
HAIR: 'shoulder length blond hair'
EYES: 'crystal blue eyes'
MARKINGS: none mentioned
POSESSIONS: A pet fox kit. Whatever happened to an owl OR a cat OR a toad?
ORIGIN: Sayoran's sister.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Sakura's new best friend.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: none so far, but I had to skim... when you read the sample, you'll see why.
NOTES: That's right... 'Hogworts'. I actually found more crossovers by searching under 'Hogworts' than by using the correct spelling. Oh, and not only are the only line breaks in the entire thing the ones in the song lyrics in the first chapter, by chapter three the author has said that even she doesn't like the fic, but is continuing it because her reviewers kept begging her for more.
If this fic has a redeeming feature, it's that Lily seems to be a secondary character; the story is mainly based around Sakura. Let us sing praises to the gods of fanfiction.
Does anybody want to name the gods of fanfiction? It's always nice to know who you're sacrificing to.
SAMPLE:
Sakura's Hogworts Adventure By water lily aka Videl Hi water lily hear I would like to say I don't own ccs or Harry Potter and I never will any way hope you liked the last chapter and I hope you will like this one on with the story!!! *~Air port~* *third person*
"Bye Touya bye dad" said Sakura as she and Tomoyo left for the plane "bye Kaijuu" said Touya "good bye Sakura" said her dad as he hugged her "have a safe trip and don't forget to write" said Tomoyo's mom as she gave her daughter a hug "don't worry I will" said Tomoyo "last call Tomeda, Japan to England" (I don't know where it is in England leave me alone ~sweet drop~ any way bye) as Sakura was about to step onto the plane Touya whispered in her ear "don't forget to take your shoes off in the plane" (he had this face -_-). "Touya I'm not going to fall for that again" Sakura yelled as she stomped into the plane (I hade to put it in!! for you people that don't know watch the first movie) 3 hours after they got on they were in England waiting for the person to show them to Diagon Alley. "Hello ladies" said a strangely familiar voice "Eriol" screamed Sakura and Tomoyo "at your serves" said Eriol "are you the one that is going to take us to Diagon Alley" asked Tomoyo. "Yes" was his reply "o that's so cool" said Sakura "shouldn't we be leaving now girls" said Eriol "ok lets go" said Sakura and Tomoyo together so they left when they got to Diagon Alley and were finished shopping for school supplies Eriol asked them if they wanted some short of pet they said they did so they went in to the nearest pet shop and started browsing. As Sakura was looking at a baby snow owl she came a cross a girl that was writing a letter and saying that she hoped Syaoran would let her have this fox kit. Sakura waked over to her "umm excuse me but did you say Syaoran" asked Sakura "yes why" asked the girl "would you by chance mean Syaoran Li" "yes how do you know my brother" "your brother Syaoran never told me he had another sister I'm Kinomoto Sakura by the way." "Your Sakura o my god big brother talks about you all the time and he just found out I'm his sister a couple of month ago the clan though he would turn soft if he know he had a little sister." "O ok so what is you name" "o I'm sorry I'm lily Li" "hay Lily what are you going to buy" "I'm going to buy this fox I'm in my third year are you in your third year too?" "Yes I'm going in too my third year umm do you know what year Syaoran is in?" "He is also in his third year with his friend Eriol what are you going to buy?" "I am going to buy this owl," said Sakura as she picked up a baby snow owl I'm going to charm her so her feathers are light pink like a cherry blossom." "That will look so Kawaii" (hope I spelled that right) after lily finished her letter and sent it they weighted a couple of minuets till they reply came when it did lily was jumping for joy "Dumbledore and my brother said I could have it" said lily as she picked up the foxes cage and went to pay for it I pick up the owl and let rest on my arm as a went to pay for her as well I thought to my self this was going to be one grate year at Hogworts (I think I will stop hear)
(Not lol) "Not wail I'm around card mistress," said a voice in the shadows *~End chapter~* Ok now it is over how did you like it I will just tell you about my charter lily she is based on me hear what she looks like! She is the average height for a 13 year old, she has shoulder length blond hair and crystal blue eyes her. Ja ne people hope you liked this chapter
TITLE: Sakura's Hogworts Adventure
PERPETRATOR: Water Lily3 (the numbering begins!)
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Lily Li (that's right... the Sue is NOT Sakura)
SPECIES: Human/Witch
HAIR: 'shoulder length blond hair'
EYES: 'crystal blue eyes'
MARKINGS: none mentioned
POSESSIONS: A pet fox kit. Whatever happened to an owl OR a cat OR a toad?
ORIGIN: Sayoran's sister.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Sakura's new best friend.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: none so far, but I had to skim... when you read the sample, you'll see why.
NOTES: That's right... 'Hogworts'. I actually found more crossovers by searching under 'Hogworts' than by using the correct spelling. Oh, and not only are the only line breaks in the entire thing the ones in the song lyrics in the first chapter, by chapter three the author has said that even she doesn't like the fic, but is continuing it because her reviewers kept begging her for more.
If this fic has a redeeming feature, it's that Lily seems to be a secondary character; the story is mainly based around Sakura. Let us sing praises to the gods of fanfiction.
Does anybody want to name the gods of fanfiction? It's always nice to know who you're sacrificing to.
SAMPLE:
Sakura's Hogworts Adventure By water lily aka Videl Hi water lily hear I would like to say I don't own ccs or Harry Potter and I never will any way hope you liked the last chapter and I hope you will like this one on with the story!!! *~Air port~* *third person*
"Bye Touya bye dad" said Sakura as she and Tomoyo left for the plane "bye Kaijuu" said Touya "good bye Sakura" said her dad as he hugged her "have a safe trip and don't forget to write" said Tomoyo's mom as she gave her daughter a hug "don't worry I will" said Tomoyo "last call Tomeda, Japan to England" (I don't know where it is in England leave me alone ~sweet drop~ any way bye) as Sakura was about to step onto the plane Touya whispered in her ear "don't forget to take your shoes off in the plane" (he had this face -_-). "Touya I'm not going to fall for that again" Sakura yelled as she stomped into the plane (I hade to put it in!! for you people that don't know watch the first movie) 3 hours after they got on they were in England waiting for the person to show them to Diagon Alley. "Hello ladies" said a strangely familiar voice "Eriol" screamed Sakura and Tomoyo "at your serves" said Eriol "are you the one that is going to take us to Diagon Alley" asked Tomoyo. "Yes" was his reply "o that's so cool" said Sakura "shouldn't we be leaving now girls" said Eriol "ok lets go" said Sakura and Tomoyo together so they left when they got to Diagon Alley and were finished shopping for school supplies Eriol asked them if they wanted some short of pet they said they did so they went in to the nearest pet shop and started browsing. As Sakura was looking at a baby snow owl she came a cross a girl that was writing a letter and saying that she hoped Syaoran would let her have this fox kit. Sakura waked over to her "umm excuse me but did you say Syaoran" asked Sakura "yes why" asked the girl "would you by chance mean Syaoran Li" "yes how do you know my brother" "your brother Syaoran never told me he had another sister I'm Kinomoto Sakura by the way." "Your Sakura o my god big brother talks about you all the time and he just found out I'm his sister a couple of month ago the clan though he would turn soft if he know he had a little sister." "O ok so what is you name" "o I'm sorry I'm lily Li" "hay Lily what are you going to buy" "I'm going to buy this fox I'm in my third year are you in your third year too?" "Yes I'm going in too my third year umm do you know what year Syaoran is in?" "He is also in his third year with his friend Eriol what are you going to buy?" "I am going to buy this owl," said Sakura as she picked up a baby snow owl I'm going to charm her so her feathers are light pink like a cherry blossom." "That will look so Kawaii" (hope I spelled that right) after lily finished her letter and sent it they weighted a couple of minuets till they reply came when it did lily was jumping for joy "Dumbledore and my brother said I could have it" said lily as she picked up the foxes cage and went to pay for it I pick up the owl and let rest on my arm as a went to pay for her as well I thought to my self this was going to be one grate year at Hogworts (I think I will stop hear)
(Not lol) "Not wail I'm around card mistress," said a voice in the shadows *~End chapter~* Ok now it is over how did you like it I will just tell you about my charter lily she is based on me hear what she looks like! She is the average height for a 13 year old, she has shoulder length blond hair and crystal blue eyes her. Ja ne people hope you liked this chapter