0084: Unlocking Hearts - Chloe & Danielle
Just finished OotP, and found the ending fascinating and rather nicely ironic. The Dark Lord's doomed... he had a 50/50 and he blew it. ^_^
I really must find a Neville Sue... poor guy deserves some recognition. And if I can't find one, dammit, I'll have somebody write one! Who wants to Sue Neville? Anybody?
Er... *hem hem*
Anywho, on with tribute week.
TITLE: Unlocking Hearts (no good can come of this)
PERPETRATOR: LockhartCharm
SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
WRITING:
SUEAGE:
WRONGNESS:
FULL NAME: Chloe and Danielle
SPECIES: Human/Witches
HAIR: not described
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: none
POSESSIONS: A picture of Gilderoy Lockhart.
ORIGIN: Random Gryffindors... might be sisters.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Chloe likes Gilderoy Lockhart. Danielle likes Sirius Black.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Utter vapidity.
NOTES: So that's where the MoM got all those brains from... they removed them from Sues who weren't using them!
SAMPLE:
Chloe snapped wide away at the sound of her alarm clock. She pulled off the covers and tried not to step on her best friend Danielle, who was dozing on the floor.
"Danielle, wake up!" Chloe said, as she shook Danielle's shoulders.
Danielle was still sound asleep. Chloe knew the only trick that would wake Danielle up. She grabbed a pillow and started hitting Danielle with it.
"What the hell Chloe?" said Danielle in an annoyed tone.
"You wouldn't wake up! It's time to get ready; we don't want to miss the train."
"Yeah yeah," said Danielle.
Chloe walked over to her bureau. She starting pulling out everything she could find, but nothing suited her. Danielle walked over to Chloe.
"Chloe, it's very simple. Look, how about this?" Danielle held up a pair of navy blue jeans and a gold tank top.
"Well, I want something more..peachy," said Chloe.
"Peachy?" questioned Danielle.
Chloe started digging through her clothes again. Finally, she found a pair of tight peach capris and a matching sleeveless tank top. She put on her gold name plate, while Danielle got dressed in the bathroom. Chloe started to make her bed when she noticed that the picture she kept of her crush was missing from under her pillow.
"DANIELLE!!" Chloe screamed.
Danielle ran out of the bathroom with a brush in one hand and a toothbrush in her mouth.
"My picture!! It's gone!" said Chloe frantically.
"Picture of what?" said Danielle.
"The picture of my crush! I keep it under my pillow and..well..it's not there!"
"You keep..a picture..of your crush..under you pillow?" said Danielle trying to hold in a laugh.
"Yes, I do thank you very much," said Chloe defiantly.
Chloe started digging through her closet while Danielle checked under the bed.
"Is this it?" said Danielle. She pulled out a wrinkled picture of a handsome 16 year old with blue eyes and gold colored hair.
"Yes!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!" said Chloe happily.
"Who is it? That's not who I think it is..is it?" said Danielle.
"I'll tell you at breakfast. You'd better hurry up."
Chloe started downstairs and left Danielle to tend to her hair. Pretty soon, Danielle came down wearing tight purple jeans with a flowered top and her hair was pulled back in a half ponytail. They sat down at the kitchen table. Chloe's mother Annabelle came into the kitchen.
"We have 20 minutes to get to the station. Eat fast or we won't get there on time!" said Annabelle.
Chloe and Danielle started shoving forkfuls of pancakes down their throats.
"So, who's this mystery crush you said you'd tell me about?" asked Danielle. She picked up her glass of pumpkin juice and took a sip.
"Gilderoy Lockhart," said Chloe with a smirk on her face.
A/N: What do you think? Should we continue? Let us know! ]}i{[-Diana and Danielle.
I really must find a Neville Sue... poor guy deserves some recognition. And if I can't find one, dammit, I'll have somebody write one! Who wants to Sue Neville? Anybody?
Er... *hem hem*
Anywho, on with tribute week.
TITLE: Unlocking Hearts (no good can come of this)
PERPETRATOR: LockhartCharm
SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
WRITING:
SUEAGE:
WRONGNESS:
FULL NAME: Chloe and Danielle
SPECIES: Human/Witches
HAIR: not described
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: none
POSESSIONS: A picture of Gilderoy Lockhart.
ORIGIN: Random Gryffindors... might be sisters.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Chloe likes Gilderoy Lockhart. Danielle likes Sirius Black.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Utter vapidity.
NOTES: So that's where the MoM got all those brains from... they removed them from Sues who weren't using them!
SAMPLE:
Chloe snapped wide away at the sound of her alarm clock. She pulled off the covers and tried not to step on her best friend Danielle, who was dozing on the floor.
"Danielle, wake up!" Chloe said, as she shook Danielle's shoulders.
Danielle was still sound asleep. Chloe knew the only trick that would wake Danielle up. She grabbed a pillow and started hitting Danielle with it.
"What the hell Chloe?" said Danielle in an annoyed tone.
"You wouldn't wake up! It's time to get ready; we don't want to miss the train."
"Yeah yeah," said Danielle.
Chloe walked over to her bureau. She starting pulling out everything she could find, but nothing suited her. Danielle walked over to Chloe.
"Chloe, it's very simple. Look, how about this?" Danielle held up a pair of navy blue jeans and a gold tank top.
"Well, I want something more..peachy," said Chloe.
"Peachy?" questioned Danielle.
Chloe started digging through her clothes again. Finally, she found a pair of tight peach capris and a matching sleeveless tank top. She put on her gold name plate, while Danielle got dressed in the bathroom. Chloe started to make her bed when she noticed that the picture she kept of her crush was missing from under her pillow.
"DANIELLE!!" Chloe screamed.
Danielle ran out of the bathroom with a brush in one hand and a toothbrush in her mouth.
"My picture!! It's gone!" said Chloe frantically.
"Picture of what?" said Danielle.
"The picture of my crush! I keep it under my pillow and..well..it's not there!"
"You keep..a picture..of your crush..under you pillow?" said Danielle trying to hold in a laugh.
"Yes, I do thank you very much," said Chloe defiantly.
Chloe started digging through her closet while Danielle checked under the bed.
"Is this it?" said Danielle. She pulled out a wrinkled picture of a handsome 16 year old with blue eyes and gold colored hair.
"Yes!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!" said Chloe happily.
"Who is it? That's not who I think it is..is it?" said Danielle.
"I'll tell you at breakfast. You'd better hurry up."
Chloe started downstairs and left Danielle to tend to her hair. Pretty soon, Danielle came down wearing tight purple jeans with a flowered top and her hair was pulled back in a half ponytail. They sat down at the kitchen table. Chloe's mother Annabelle came into the kitchen.
"We have 20 minutes to get to the station. Eat fast or we won't get there on time!" said Annabelle.
Chloe and Danielle started shoving forkfuls of pancakes down their throats.
"So, who's this mystery crush you said you'd tell me about?" asked Danielle. She picked up her glass of pumpkin juice and took a sip.
"Gilderoy Lockhart," said Chloe with a smirk on her face.
A/N: What do you think? Should we continue? Let us know! ]}i{[-Diana and Danielle.