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0067: Kyra Malfoy - Kyra Malfoy

Jun 10, 2003 19:22

DracoFan626 week continues... and it's going to be a roller coaster, folks! By that I mean it'll make you sick, and the first bit was the high point.

TITLE: Kyra Malfoy
PERPETRATOR: DracoFan626

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
WRITING:

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pw - woobie/cry for me, be - blue eyes, ph - gryffindor house, rating - toxic, oc - house elf/elves, pc - goodie-two-shoes, bh - blond/blonde hair, sw-o - sparklypoos, ph - beauxbaton, related to the malfoys, je - student (transfer), sw-o - bitchiwitch, nts - name is in the title (oc)

Comments 39

asrimal June 10 2003, 18:54:03 UTC

Why would Narcissa want her back? Narcissa is just as bad as the other ones!

Duh wonderlander June 10 2003, 19:56:47 UTC

Well obviously since Narcissa is a mother, she has become a fluffy bunny.

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mayatawi June 10 2003, 20:09:55 UTC

This person uses the word "fortunately" in ways I do not understand.

GRRRRRR! reddheart June 10 2003, 22:51:08 UTC

"This...oh this is....absolute precious.."

*while unscrewing the wand from his cane*

"I am not even going to beat the Sue first. I'm going straight to the point..."

*commences with about six rounds of Crucio-evilness before laying out a very emphatic AVADA KEDAVRA...*

"My wife does NOT bloody cook, either."

*brushes himself off, goes back to sipping his brandy*

deliciouspear June 12 2003, 00:31:49 UTC

Doooooooood.

Insulting Lucius and Snape in one sentance.

She must be destroyed.

~Squee

*Gags* shortiefromhell June 10 2003, 19:01:20 UTC

...

Please tell me that's a sick sort of parody... please...

I'm not even going to COMMENT on the character- she speaks completely for herself.

The french however... I've taken french for three years, and horrible as I am at it, I can still at least get my point across with words I'm comfortable with. It is obvious that she, on the other hand, used an online translator. Everything is translated directly word for word.

Vider is a verb, you idiot! Not a noun!

Re: *Gags* deliciouspear June 12 2003, 00:33:32 UTC

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“What is it you two are fighting about thins time?” Lucius asked them, in his usual silky tone.
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Not ONLY can she NOT speak French, Lucius can't even speak ENGLISH.

~Squee

beckyhoadley June 10 2003, 19:17:14 UTC

*Slaps down Mary-sue and retrieves Lucius's testicles*

Not nice to castrate pretty bad boys.

cries invalidcaracter June 10 2003, 19:40:05 UTC

She killed my native tongue! Nothing she said meant what she said it did. And poor Lucius and Draco! Come here boys, Tamra will give you snuggles and sharp pointy things.