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0045: The Merging of Two Worlds - Kalysta Weasley

May 19, 2003 21:33

Ho hum.

TITLE: The Merging of Two Worlds
PERPETRATOR: Emmy Frances

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

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ntt - musical name, y - hogwarts years (non-specific), be - blue eyes, rating - bad, rom - harry potter, pt - adults are useless, af - speshul spells (done better), b - speshul eyes, sw-o - bitchiwitch, pt - parents are mean, ntt - antiquity names, bh - golden hair, ship - harry potter/oc, sw-o - tootsitramp, bh - blond/blonde hair, e - american, related to the weasleys, rom - oc, pw - subject matter not kawaii, pc - relationship sue, af - speshul spells (makes the spell)

Comments 23

jovial_kitten May 19 2003, 21:26:12 UTC

God that mary sue is a bitch

enochiansigils May 19 2003, 22:57:00 UTC

The best part is from chapter 8. Her "note".

I'm a second semester senior, with a bad case of senoritas

So... she has a bad case of young Spanish women?

tifag May 19 2003, 22:58:09 UTC

Did you see the review she posted on her own story? *gags*

And you would think a Weasely cousin would have red hair.

Bizarre use of a summoning charm, and a magical dressing spell. The latter allows her to get changed in front of boys without them seeing anything. I am totally serious.

Somebody has been watching a little too much Sailor Moon *nods* Yes indeed.

donna_c_punk May 20 2003, 00:04:34 UTC

Why oh why do these writers feel the need to have their Sues be complete bitches to Hermione? It irritates me no end (and the fact that Hermione is my favorite character has a bit to do with that) and does nothing to "endear" their little self-insertion to me.

Secondly, since when did Draco become such a horndog who wants to fuck anything female on the goddamn train? Anyone? Anyone? Bueller?

anoelleona May 20 2003, 04:05:21 UTC

Was looking at the reviews. Her own in particular. She brings fairies into it? Egh.

Malfoy just laughed. "It's all over the paper! Everyone knows that you're the Weasely cousin from California."

Why would that news be all over the paper? Why would anyone care?

"The trees here are so fluffy." Harry didn't comment. "I'm so used to seeing spiky trees, and sand. Here, it's so.green!"

"What was it like in California," Harry asked, hoping she wouldn't bite his head off like she did to Hermione.

"Very warm and sunny. I lived on the beach." She shivered.

Umm...I live in California. I see green quite often. It is not all warm and sunny either. Especially on some of the beaches. Someone has never been to Northern California, or else would not be so grossly mis-informed. I hope.

What exactly is a 'fluffy tree'? A tree that grows cotton fluff? Bellybutton lint? Cotton Candy?

arcian May 20 2003, 04:08:55 UTC

"...Use clean, even strokes, and always remember to make your trees look like fluffy trees!"

anoelleona May 20 2003, 04:12:42 UTC

*smacks forehead* That is it! It was so obvious!

Ah...nostalgia...art days of my youth...*wipes away a tear*

anoelleona December 29 2003, 12:55:47 UTC

I know, honestly! Even in mid- or Southern California, the beaches aren't all golden sand and aquamarine waves. The winter can get pretty nasty--just a few days ago there was a bad earthquake near San Luis Obispo--and the sun does NOT always shine. I wish people cared enough to write about places they're from, or have at least BEEN to!