5007: Lisa Skywalker: The Philosopher's Stone - Lisa Skywalker

[pottersues]

Title: Lisa Skywalker: The Philosopher's Stone
Perpetrator: Sheeta Granger
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: Her avatar is a picture of Hermione from the movies.
Summary: “Lisa is the cousin of Harry Potter and the Sister of Luke Skywalker and Leia Oranga Skywalker and goes to Hogwarts for school but lives in Alderaan with her sister and her

Comments

[darth_gojira]

So do Sola Naberrie and Petunia Evans exist?

This is jamming both universes together without any kind of thought. My mind is melting. IS EARTH PART OF THE STAR WARS GALAXY?! WHAT ABOUT THE EMPIRE? DOES THE EMPIRE EXIST? DOES VADER EXIST?! HOW DOES MAGIC INTERACT WITH THE FORCE?!

(minds enters blue screen of death)

[auregan]

This story is definitely very confusing. I don't know the other fandom, but I am sure that if the Harry Potter canon is being treated so thrown together at random (I don't know the word to say), then the other fandom must also be the same.

Shouldn't a crossover fic acknowledge and respect both canons? In this case we have a Harry Potter/Star Wars crossover. I don't know if this has been done before, but I am sure it could work if both the canons were acknowledged in some way or other.

[darth_gojira]

Star Wars is one of my main fandoms, so this is just plain mind bending.

[auregan]

I don't know the Star Wars fandom so I don't know what is canon and what's not, but I am fairly certain that there are a lot of things that make Star Wars great to explore as a fandom and I think the world building is definitely one of them. It just seems that the author didn't put much consideration into their story when it comes to the worlds they are writing for.

Star Wars definitely has a lot going for it in terms of story lines and characters. It's sad to see that there's hardly any representation outside of name drops and mentions of the Star Wars franchise being randomly dropped into this story.

[auregan]

I agree with you, Pottersues. Everything about this story seems to be thrown together and not thought out or developed properly. I don't know much about the canon of Star Wars, but I am sure that if the Harry Potter canon is haphazardly put together in this story that the same can be said for the other fandom.

I particularly like the beginning sentence: "Lisa Skywalker is a special girl..."

[anonymous]

The grammar hurts my brain. Either this suethor is seven years old or the school system has failed her - badly.

Also, wouldn't R2 just not work at Hogwarts?

[auregan]

I don't think that the author considered the fact that something like R2 wouldn't work at Hogwarts or maybe the character is extra special and electronics and robots work for just her.

[yemi_hikari]

So, I'm sure I came across this one on Wattpad before, but said story is no longer up over there if it was. I do recognize the writer. I suspect they're rather young.