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Jul 05, 2019 23:07

I had a good Forth of July yesterday.

Title: Eyes of Violet
Perpetrator: macadoodle1996
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: It’s a picture of a black and white photo of an eye where the eye is made purple.
Summary: “Evanna Belinda Malfoy does not look like a Malfoy. Does not act like a Malfoy. Does not want to be a Malfoy. But she ought to have ( Read more... )

rating - toxic, c - unknown, ap - athletic pursuit, b - sphesul height, bh - black hair, related to voldemort, related to the malfoys, be - purple eyes, b - speshul eyes, ap - academic pursuit

Comments 3

auregan July 7 2019, 16:59:27 UTC

Oh wow, this character is annoying. Special eyes aside, Evanna is atrocious as a human being. The way she treats those around her is just awful. I hate how Evanna gets more of these dueling lessons from Lucius and is treated as though she's the Chosen One when Draco is treated differently. The fact that she's able to do all this magic before Hogwarts just seems like she's supposed to be portrayed as this special and all powerful character ( ... )

anonymous July 16 2019, 17:07:20 UTC

This Sue is so old school, she makes me nostalgic.

darth_gojira August 16 2019, 17:26:21 UTC

"The time for resistance was gone" (laughs in Brigantes)

Why do authors not get the ONE positive thing the Malfoys have: love for their family? They give them all these other positive qualities they don't have, but ignore the one thing they DO!

A Malfoy who isn't evil is an interesting and sound concept for a story, but you'd have a lot of hoops to jump: the people who are indoctrinating the character also genuinely love them. How do you do that? Of course, they could pull a Sirius, but given how Draco acted when meeting Harry compared to how Sirius interacted with James, it's not a sure thing.