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4483: Turning Page - Hannah Marshall

Oct 17, 2018 23:13

Title: Turning Page
Perpetrator: jadeannkneeky
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: Their avatar is Starry Night meets Hogwarts.
Summary: “I had kissed James Potter and all I felt was guilt. I had promised Rose and Albus that there was nothing going on, lying to my best friends. I could barely even bring myself to look at Albus, knowing it would ( Read more... )

pw - woobie/cry for me, rating - awful, p - sue what plot? swp, pf - new/next generation, pc - relationship sue, jr - tramp

Comments 4

darth_gojira October 20 2018, 12:57:18 UTC

I'm going to try Forgetting Hannah Marshall.

yemi_hikari October 22 2018, 19:36:19 UTC

Is there a bit to much focus on word counts by this writer? I'm rather floored they actually tried justifying their writing issues when they're the one who decided to write everything before posting rather than serializing as they went. It makes it much harder to change the direction one is going because it is already written.

Jadeannkneeky anonymous December 4 2018, 03:07:17 UTC

Hi Jadeannkneeky here, I don’t have a live journal account so apologies for having to post anonymously ( ... )

Re: Jadeannkneeky pottersues December 4 2018, 07:18:11 UTC

First, you're welcome. Second, you should be proud of finishing something, but no matter the quality you should be proud of the work you do particularly since that is how you grow as a writer ( ... )