Comments | pottersues: 0350: Opal

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0350: Opal - Opal Harris

Mar 20, 2004 20:33

Jewel-Sue week chugs along... day six:

TITLE: Opal
PERPETRATOR: poetrygurl

SUE-O-METER:

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ph - hufflepuff, e - american, rating - okay

Comments 53

clovecigarettes March 20 2004, 19:48:49 UTC

"the deep, plush, cushiony airplane seat"
That's the most unbelievable part of the whole story.

jamac March 20 2004, 19:59:56 UTC

I second that.

caniche March 21 2004, 04:21:05 UTC

I was sitting in first class.

That would explain the soft ass-cushion and the satin pillow.... then again I never travelled first class so I cannot tell how acurate it really is ;P

morzsa March 21 2004, 06:01:26 UTC

Not true for the first class flights I took.

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snowyofthenight March 20 2004, 19:58:25 UTC

Um... why not go to a DIFFERENT school in the states? If I hadn't gotten into the all girls' school I applied to, I would have gone to the local school. I assume they have just regular wizarding schools that you don't have to "get in" to?

merulina March 21 2004, 07:05:30 UTC

They weren't good enough in her mothers eyes. You know, "filth and scum" of the regular people and all that.

jamac March 20 2004, 19:59:14 UTC

The idea isn't all that bad... and at least there isn't an abused!sue.
However, the prose was so purple i couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. Not every noun needs six adjectives afterward. Geeze.

terrene70 March 20 2004, 20:00:59 UTC

Ack, adjective overload. Do we need to know the texture and hue of every freaking object that she comes in contact with?

ciara_belle March 20 2004, 20:11:28 UTC

'17 Sickles to a Galleon

Well, it's not the metric system, but at least she's paying some attention to canon!

*sigh* So many talented authors wasted on Sue stories. At least this one is too bad.