3488: Misplaced - Aurora Minerva Black Lupin

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TITLE: Misplaced
PERPETRATOR: hufflepuffpower93
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Comments

[cal_yn]

December of 1996...if you were coming back to keep your father alive, aren't you about seven months too late, Miss Sue? And how could Teddy be born so much later if both his parents were dead? Or did you "fix" that too?

And anyway, if Sirius is dead, you don't exist at all and never will, therefore you can't return to prevent his death unless you're from a totally different timeline altogether.

Sirius and Hermione, good grief. Why does it never occur to these people that he's twenty years older than her? Or Snape. Or Lupin. They're all 35 or 36 to her 16 in OOTP.

[darth_gojira]

" Hermione/Sirius,"

NO! STOP! BAD!