Comments | potent_serpent: The Ring

dyingisbliss58 in potent_serpent

The Ring

Jan 18, 2006 17:07

Author: dyingisbliss58
Title: The Ring
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The Harry Potter Series is not mine, nor are any of its characters.
Summary: Harry findsout what Blaise never got the chance to do.

( The Ring )

rating: pg, fanfic, author: dyingisbliss58

Comments 6

mara_202 January 19 2006, 11:03:20 UTC

Awwww... *cries* That was really sad! Just curious: what does the E in BEZ stand for?

Good fic!

dyingisbliss58 January 19 2006, 20:16:34 UTC

I dunno. It's fannon Blaise's middle name. Or at lest that's what a fellow shipper told me...

mara_202 January 20 2006, 18:25:17 UTC

Hmmm... *interested* I always use 'Pascal' as his middle name. But that's because I'm a physics/maths freak. :P *waves Blaise Pascal flag*

dyingisbliss58 January 20 2006, 20:20:57 UTC

lol.
Yea, I dunno. I'm just now informed that it wasn't "fannon" Blaise. It was just what she thought was right. *grr*

anonymous January 24 2006, 06:38:39 UTC

Beautiful.

But you should check over your story and fix up all spelling mistakes. Also, you should make each line break into a new paragraph. Any story is a lot harder to read when it's just one big block of text without paragraphs.

dyingisbliss58 January 29 2006, 08:35:23 UTC

Thanks for the tips. I hadn't even noticed the spelling. My typing is shot to hell a lot of the time.