complete and utter crap... please move along.

Nov 30, 2005 13:00

not anything worth anything, the image was just stuck in my head and i had to get it out.

"This Moment"

Not last year's cold and
careful dissection,
the steely tug of forceps
on innards.

No;
rather
this is
a swift but not unexpected slice,
perhaps even a coup de grace.
An arm (one of five--not near a majority)
to regenerate
slowly
and without

poem, break up

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moonsilver4 November 30 2005, 18:31:14 UTC
you starfished it!
please remember that as long as a portion of the central nerve disc exists, the entire starfish will grow itself back.
love love love
-your twin.

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postmodernpeach November 30 2005, 19:11:24 UTC
exactly. hence the image. :)

and damn you and your l'engling for putting the image there to begin with.

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moonsilver4 November 30 2005, 23:24:08 UTC
:-D

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anonymous November 30 2005, 18:49:22 UTC
hmm, i really like it, strong images, but not overt. very confessional poetess, more leaning towards Plath's subtle style though, and not so much with Sexton's apparent self-focus.

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born_of_words November 30 2005, 18:49:59 UTC
oh man, i keep forgetting to log in, but that was me again.

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postmodernpeach November 30 2005, 19:10:55 UTC
oh. hee hee, then regard my comment to your anonymous comment.

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postmodernpeach November 30 2005, 19:10:27 UTC
why thank you, oh anonymous commenter on poetry. but who ARE you? sorry, but i'm nothing if not a curious little bird.

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anonymous November 30 2005, 21:38:44 UTC
i asked off for dec. 8 pm.
thanks for the message. i loved hearing your sweetness in my voice mail.
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postmodernpeach November 30 2005, 21:54:21 UTC
woot. :)

and please, as the subject line says, disregard the shittiness that was this post.

i'm sooooooooooooooooo excited. please ignore my last comment telling you to cancel your plans for next thursday the 8th. i didn't see this one first.

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