So, basically, I'm still just as in love with this as ever, porn or no porn. I love plotty fic ever so much. So this is still really awesome all around.
Most importantly: BOOOOONES.
No, really, Bones. *squee* Oh, you have pirate!Bones just so ON. And I kind of got goosebumps from Pike asking about the professional pirate or professional doctor - and then the "both" reply, and the imagery of the two differing items in his hands, and oh wow, wow, wow, it's just so spot-on and perfect and I adore it. I'm kind of already clawing at him and needing more, 'cause like - he really is just shining through. The snarkiness but just, the way it's directed now, it's still the same but so much different and I seriously can't wait for backstories, you. :D
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EVERY TIME YOUR COMMENT GETS LONGER. AND MAKES ME THAT MUCH HAPPIER. (It's now at a quarter of the total length of the chapter. A quarter. I love you so hard, you know that, right?)
Um. Yeah. Anyway. I just. *flail* The characters worked for you! BONES worked for you, more specifically, him and his ludicrous small talk! And Spock Prime, you noticed him earlier and thought it made sense and *gleeeee*
His newfound hatred is gloriously straightforward, just this side of love, and it leaves no room for contemplation, for negotiation. It will be enough, he tells himself, never to see Kirk again. He's being sane, rational, adult. Revenge is not the goal, escape is the goal. *** OMFG Yes.
Broken!Spock is so very much the perfect Vulcan Ex Machina. : ) And your McCoy... aaaah.
I -- omg, that is so EVERYBODY, so McCoy in his essential sweetness, so Spock in his essential VAST LOVE FOR ALL JAMES t KIRKS, so PIke in that he's hurt far worse by being lied to than, well, the kinda-sorta sexual assault Jim perpetrated upon him.
Okay, good. Because fuck me if I can tell whether I'm characterizing them realistically in the wee hours of the morning, which was when this was inadvisably written. So. You know. :DDDDDD :DDDDDDDDDDDD <3.
Even if there's no porn this awesome/brilliant/perfect/amazing.
You also made my day.
I was a little wary of reading this at first, mainly because I don't like to read multi-chaps 'cause I'm always afraid they'll be abandoned or something but I couldn't resist and I'm so glad that I couldn't.
Bones was perfect and Spock Prime? I have no words.
Just, brilliant and perfect/awesome/great/amazing.
I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter, no matter how long it takes.
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So, basically, I'm still just as in love with this as ever, porn or no porn. I love plotty fic ever so much. So this is still really awesome all around.
Most importantly: BOOOOONES.
No, really, Bones. *squee* Oh, you have pirate!Bones just so ON. And I kind of got goosebumps from Pike asking about the professional pirate or professional doctor - and then the "both" reply, and the imagery of the two differing items in his hands, and oh wow, wow, wow, it's just so spot-on and perfect and I adore it. I'm kind of already clawing at him and needing more, 'cause like - he really is just shining through. The snarkiness but just, the way it's directed now, it's still the same but so much different and I seriously can't wait for backstories, you. :D ( ... )
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Um. Yeah. Anyway. I just. *flail* The characters worked for you! BONES worked for you, more specifically, him and his ludicrous small talk! And Spock Prime, you noticed him earlier and thought it made sense and *gleeeee*
Ahem.
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Saying that the characters worked for me is such an understatement. It's so perfect. D: I am in CONSTANT AWE/glee.
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GOOD. XD I mean, just -- I'm never sure about my characterizations, and -- yeah. *flaps hands at you*
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OMFG Yes.
Broken!Spock is so very much the perfect Vulcan Ex Machina. : ) And your McCoy... aaaah.
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I -- omg, that is so EVERYBODY, so McCoy in his essential sweetness, so Spock in his essential VAST LOVE FOR ALL JAMES t KIRKS, so PIke in that he's hurt far worse by being lied to than, well, the kinda-sorta sexual assault Jim perpetrated upon him.
This is going to be INTERESTING.
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Heh, I think I love you.
Even if there's no porn this awesome/brilliant/perfect/amazing.
You also made my day.
I was a little wary of reading this at first, mainly because I don't like to read multi-chaps 'cause I'm always afraid they'll be abandoned or something but I couldn't resist and I'm so glad that I couldn't.
Bones was perfect and Spock Prime? I have no words.
Just, brilliant and perfect/awesome/great/amazing.
I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter, no matter how long it takes.
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I'm kinda pissed at Spock Prime. (In a good way)
I'm worried about Pirate!McCoy (I love your Bones)
I love resolved!Badass!Angry!Pike.
But...I don't want anything bad to happen to Pirate!Jim, because I luuuuuuurve him.
Oh, this one has my insides all mixed up. Great work.
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I want PIKE to feel the same way. Um...in a really fucked up way, I suppose.
Seriously, I had shivers.
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...*is struck by a thunderbolt for the force of her hypocrisy*
Really, though, you're cruel.
And I intend him to. Otherwise, believe you me, he wouldn't have agreed to Spock's little plan. Good old denial. :'D
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