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Prompt Post Round 1

Apr 27, 2011 02:38

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. harder to breathe |5| anonymous May 15 2011, 18:28:41 UTC

A peal of soundless laughter bubbled over her lips as she scrambled down the crater's side, falling over charred dirt and embedded stones, but ignoring the way her feet-bare now of the long fall jump boots as they had been ever since her departure from Aperture Science-suffered. There were going to be shallow cuts filled with debris on her soles, and they were going to be a pain to clean out later, There was a literal field's worth of lacerations spanning the entirely of her leg beneath the knee, where her rolled-up jumpsuit pants no longer properly protecting the skin of her legs as she ran. Her hair was a tangled mess, no longer even held away from her face by a band. Chell didn't care about that ( ... )

. harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 15 2011, 18:34:58 UTC

Most of the words were nonsense, or fragmented repeats of things he had said below ground, while speaking to her on the rail, as if he could no longer comprehend the world as it was, and had been forced to stew in the remains of his own mind. Every few minutes or so, a pained, weary sighing shook his mangled form, and he would whimper how sorry he was, how he hoped that everything had turned out for the best...

...that he was getting exactly what he deserved.

It was those words that made her move into what she suspected was his field of vision, kneeling down in front of him. Her legs immediately buzzed uncomfortably; the ground around him had soaked up the energy bleeding out of him for however long he'd been laying there. She ignored it, in favor of leaning in close to him. His optic moved to focus on her-he could see her-but moments later the light drifted to the side listlessly, and his under-breath rambling continued, as though she had never been there. Waving her hand closer to his iris didn't seem to work, he only flinched ( ... )

Re: . harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 15 2011, 18:39:02 UTC

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Re: . harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 15 2011, 18:47:12 UTC

O-Oh, god. Chell, please. Please save him, please... Sobbing here. Don't leave us hanging, don't end it here, please!

F5 F5 F5 F5 F5

Re: . harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 15 2011, 19:13:11 UTC

"One in a million she was." well hey it's never too early in the day to cry like a baby

Anon, I love you :'(

Re: . harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 16 2011, 02:24:53 UTC

Nooooo! Man I have no idea where this fic is going next. Unless that's the end. In which case NOOOOOO!

Re: . harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 16 2011, 03:55:58 UTC

brb, CRYING FOREVER. Please tell me there's more. *bawww*

Re: . harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 16 2011, 04:19:42 UTC

WHERE DID THESE TEARS COME FROM?

This is a damn classy fill, writeranon.
Each bit stands completely on its own which
is a little horrifying because I am always hoping that you will write more.

Anyhow, well done and thanks for making me wibble.

Re: . harder to breathe |6| scancrasher May 16 2011, 05:34:51 UTC

Oh man. There is only one word that can accurately describe this, and that is heartrending.

I like how these could be strung together into snippets of one story, or how most of them could sort of stand on their own, as little vignettes, which, I believe, was your design, as you mentioned that you had multiple ideas. You pulled it off masterfully.

Wonderful, wonderful stuff, covering such a broad spectrum from menacingly sexy to amusing to the aforementioned heartrending. You, anon, are CREDIT TO TEAM. <3 Never stop writing!

Re: . harder to breathe |6| anonymous May 17 2011, 00:54:32 UTC

Reading this kind of destroyed me. As a human being. In the best and most beautiful way possible. Jesus, that hurt, but it was just so beautiful... never leave this kink meme, you're one of my absolute favorite authors here.

. harder to breathe |7| anonymous May 17 2011, 06:40:45 UTC

Chell let out a noise that could very easily have been a sob, but it was cut short when she swallowed it forcefully, pulling her arm around him tighter, until her fingertips brushed her ear. Wheatley tucked himself in as close to the crook of her throat and shoulder, flexing his panels even so often to direct the speed her other arm moved with, and every once in a blue moon, pressing his closed shutters to her cheek in the closest semblance of a kiss he could give her. He could see everything from this position, the way her throat moved with every needy little noise she made, her chest rising and giving small tremors with each breath, the tension in her form as she tried to keep the time he set for her ( ... )

. harder to breathe |end| anonymous May 17 2011, 06:43:06 UTC

“Keep breathing, angel.” Wheatley didn't usually call her that to her face. It was fact to him, something that she was, a primary function of her already magnificent existence. She was a spectacular miracle, and he could only tack cheap words to that in an effort to try and describe her. This one was the only thing that came close. Somehow using it daily would cheapen it. But with her hovering on that margin, clinging to him so fiercely and needing him.

She deserved it.

God, he would give her anything.

And she reacted well to the name, a faint inhalation of surprise making her back arch and reach for the paradise humans always seemed to believe was beyond the sky, and her fingers dug just a little too deeply, her knuckles going white. The fluid rocking of her hips at the pleasant shock called to him, endeavored to pull his optic off of her, but this was what he wanted. Fantastic, this was going to be...just...fantastic...

Her gaze rolled back to meet his.

Pleasepleasepleaseplease ( ... )

Re: . harder to breathe |end| scancrasher May 17 2011, 17:11:54 UTC

Man, I could go on about the finale, and the emotional roller coaster you took us ALL on during the course of these fics. I could thank you for responding to my RUDE REQUEST to do all the fills, all of them, (and I do) and I could both simultaneously praise and curse you for delving into such extremes of human emotion in so few words. Praise because, damn, that ending was a perfect mesh of tenderness and sexiness, and curse because, shit, you had us all bawling towards the middle.

But I think Wheatley said it best.

"Top marks."

<3!

Re: . harder to breathe |end| anonymous May 18 2011, 04:28:14 UTC

Absolutely breathtaking. Tender and loving and sweet and hot - this installment had it all. We're really lucky to have a writer like you around these parts.

Re: . harder to breathe |end| anonymous May 18 2011, 04:30:50 UTC

So. Damned. Good.

I worry it will get overlooked since it's fitting into the "..." margins. Hopefully more readers will take notice that you've finished this, because yay this was good.

Re: . harder to breathe |5| anonymous May 15 2011, 18:35:12 UTC

OHMYGOD the suspense is killing me anon. Seriously. CANNOT WAIT for next update.

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