SHORT - Lox and Gre (HP/SS)

[tradescant]

Usually, I'm not much of a smut-writer, but...you know how sometimes you just read fics and love them so much and want more so much that you want to go ahead and write it yourself? Well, maybe you don't, but that's what this is. It's a mini-sequel to "Idle Hands" by Nimori, and I don't think you need the one to understand the other, but man, if

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[xandria]

Mmmnn.. yes... what they've all said. Wonderful.

I love it!

Well done.

Am too incoherant.

So few people write Snarry the way I like... you certainly do.

[tradescant]

<33333333333 my Xan!!

Thank you!

[lyricalnights]

How sexy and snarky, much like Idle Hands.

The imagery is great: he pulls Potter’s head around by the hair, pulls off his glasses, and licks the splashes of come from his face, and then when all he can see are Potter’s pink cheeks and his nose with the three faint freckles on.

I also love the extended look at the power plays that got started in IH, and how Harry has a certain amount of control in this little... arrangement... as well.

And, much as I started with, hot. ;)

[tradescant]

Harry has a certain amount of control in this little... arrangement... as well

Well, I saw a little bit of that happening at the very end of Idle Hands, and I wanted to try to make this the end result of a sort of natural evolution over the course of months. And I mean. It's Harry! Give Harry a chance to sit down and work through a problem and he'll come out on top (no pun intended :D) sooner or later. Harry is a remarkably resilient, if fucked-up, soul. A problem-solver, if you will.

[lyricalnights]

he'll come out on top (no pun intended :D)

Liar. ;)

[venivincere]

Oh. My. God.

This is so seriously hot (otter lets Severus jerk and mock him into another rough orgasm and curls so tightly up that his glasses and cheeks are coated ), and so layered (They’re operating on a barter system now, a bit of confidence for a bit of shame, control for humiliation, skill for innocence, and Severus can see these transactions as they occur now, because he’s looking for them.)... who is the whore, really? Who is in control?

This the best thing I've read in a long while. I think I am addicted to you.

[tradescant]

Hoo boy, I guess I better up the production, because right now, I am kind of a hard addiction--like being a heroin addict in a place that only receives shipment once a year.

*puts on goggles and latex gloves and steals away to fic-lab in garage*

[venivincere]

Can't I just mainline you? (How's that for a come-on line?)

[tradescant]

hahahaha!

*gets out syringe and mini blowtorch*

[switchknife]

I've recced you, by the way. Because you made my day. *hits self* Stupid rhyme. You know I love you.

[tradescant]

*smooch!* THANK YOU AGAIN!

[tradescant]

Thank you kindly, ma'am!

I mean, even if hostilities between them lessened, I can see any interaction between them becoming a sort of constant struggle for supremacy. Just one of many directions this dynamic can take, I guess.

[tradescant]

:O

:D

Thank you!!