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por_queeee

Prompt fill

Jun 04, 2009 14:47

Rorschach’s fingers are nimble as they push the needle in, out, in, out. The slice from the topknot’s knife cinches shut easily, skin pulling together with each gentle tug of thread, blood bubbling up here and there to slowly trickle down his freckled leg. He was stupid; dodged right when he should have ducked left. The result is the six inch wound ( Read more... )

watchmen, fanfiction, prompt fill

Comments 29

rwyterstar June 4 2009, 19:26:02 UTC

Oh, no. Ooooh... if this doesn't just break my heart. Poor baby. It just makes me want to write a fic where he is taken care of and cossetted a little bit. He deserves it. Great job as usual! :) Loved it.

por_queeee June 4 2009, 20:27:45 UTC

I know, THE ANGST! Thanks :D

findmyantidrug June 4 2009, 19:28:28 UTC

Oh, I like this. D: I especially love how mechanical Rorschach is stitching himself up, how he just does it like his body's a piece of clothing. That rings really true to Rorschach, I think. Also, the QUOTE, especially rereading it after reading the fic, put a huge D: face on me. Great job!

por_queeee June 4 2009, 20:29:37 UTC

I agree, it really seems like how he would treat his body; just as a tool to catch criminals.

Yeah while I was writing this I randomly remembered reading that quote and realized it would fit really well with what I was trying to get across.

Thanks!

snake_easing June 4 2009, 20:49:46 UTC

Aw! I want those things for him too. The flashbacks were used to very good effect.

por_queeee June 5 2009, 02:13:26 UTC

Thanks!

lady_wormtongue June 4 2009, 21:01:55 UTC

Really nice, gotta love some Rorschach angst! Thanks for sharing. :)

por_queeee June 5 2009, 02:14:42 UTC

No prob, thanks for the comment! Yes, Rorschach is just a ball of angst. MY NEXT FIC WILL BE FLUFFIER I PROMISE.

wednesday42 June 4 2009, 23:44:22 UTC

So beautiful... ouch. I love it when an author can make me just want to give that man a hug even as I know it'd cost me broken bones and massive internal bleeding (at best xD) - so kudos for that. :)

(I shall use this as inspiration for a "make Rorschach happy fertheluvvagawd" fic to make myself feel better... )

por_queeee June 5 2009, 02:17:16 UTC

Thanks, it mean's a lot to hear that! And yes, I assume he would kill us all if we tried to hug him.

Yes! For the love of god, make the man happy for once!