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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 19 in 3 parts

Nov 05, 2008 11:24

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17 for the whole story
Thanks: To Em (smilesalot) for your fast turnouaround and great help with this chapter, and to Keren for your constant support.
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

MIddle of Nowhere 19 cwby30 November 5 2008, 17:06:45 UTC

Mornin'.

Well, have read all three parts, and like how you're wrapping up their summer together. They still have some things to figure out, but they're on the right track.

But... I've been saving your story, and this is the first time that I can't 'copy' and 'paste' it onto my computer. Did you change your formatting? In html instead of rich text? Vice versa? I'd sure appreciate a change so I can save this chapter, too.

Thanks again.

Re: MIddle of Nowhere 19 poppyhoney_67 November 7 2008, 13:33:16 UTC

Hi cwby30, i dont know why you cant copy and paste it either, as the only thing different I did was change the font colour....I cant see how that would make a difference. Sorry.....I hope you can figure out a way to save the story. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Stay tuned for the last 2 chapters.

Re: MIddle of Nowhere 19 cwby30 November 12 2008, 06:18:43 UTC

Evenin'.

Well, I just figured it out! You made the font color white, so when I copied it, the print was white and I pasted it onto a white piece of paper, so the words disappeared into the background. So, I copied the whole thing, selected "all" of Chapter 19, and changed the font color to default/black and... viola! the words magically appeared. So glad...

Thanks again.

rt_in_town November 6 2008, 04:42:02 UTC

Thank you for such a beautiful opening scene! The image of Jack approaching the new and unfamiliar art with trepidation, then with Ennis seating himself behind him and making Jack sigh with satisfaction and comfort, as he runs big hands all over Jack's body, steadying his wrists.... finally breaking Jack's concentration altogether so that our boy goes all dizzy with need, and has to be pinned down against the tabletop before he can be pleasured, squirming and moaning, to the point of release.... all too beautiful for words. As Jack continued, he became aware that Ennis had moved one of his hands away from the counter and was now slowly rubbing the back of his neck, softly caressing his exposed skin. Jack closed his eyes, letting the lazy circles rub into his skin and seep deeper inside. The tender traces of Ennis’s fingers stroking his neck and the hard ridge of Ennis‘s erection pressing against the back of his thigh were wreaking havoc on his concentration. He gave up and leaned back, letting his head fall on to Ennis’s shoulder. ( ... )

poppyhoney_67 November 7 2008, 13:34:26 UTC

My word rt_in_town, that was some comment....your descrption of the opening scene was amazing! So much better than what I actually wrote!! Phew, I was getting hot reading it ha ha

Thanks for commenting...:)

rt_in_town November 13 2008, 09:43:56 UTC

Aww, it's so thrilling as a reader to know that one's comments can be of value (and erotic sustenance!) to the writer. I just reread this segment, my favorite part of the chapter. Especially loved how Jack's efforts at the woodcutting just degenerated under Ennis' presence and seduction, to the point where Ennis is doing this ( ... )