Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 9

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Thanks: To smilesalot. Thank you, Em, for all your help, you have helped me so much, and I'm so glad you're my beta.

Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.

Author's Note: This chapter

Comments

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi goldfish, thanks for your post, glad you was excited to see the chapter posted, just hope you enjoy the chapter!

[big_heart_june]

“Come on in,” Jack said quietly, his eyes never leaving Ennis’s face. “I won’t bite.”

Ennis stepped in and Jack closed the door. He turned around as Jack leaned against the door, one hand by his side, the other by his mouth, his thumb grazing his bottom lip, tantalizingly slow.

God, *feels weak* I loved this. You wrote their longing and need and desire for each other so well. I felt dizzy myself! LOL. Loved this sexy beautiful line too:

“Damn, Ennis,” Jack said, nestling his mouth against Ennis’s ear. “You do me in.”I just adore Jack's reassurances and I sure hope they'll be able to get together like this many many many times

[poppyhoney_67]

Hey June, thanks for such a lovely comment, I'm so glad you liked it. I wanted this to be really special, so glad it worked for you. And yes, we'll get to know all about Jack's birthday, don't you worry. That might even take *two* chapters to write!! LOL Thanks for reading!

[jennasts]

Some of the things I like about your writing: the attention you give to it, and the detail you provide in it, and the sheer length of it. With some fiction, you simply need length to accomplish all you want to do with it, and you don't skimp. I really like that.

This is a story I really enjoy reading. I wonder how they will end their time at the camp? Keep writing!
Love,
Jenna

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Jenna, wow, thank you for such a lovely comment. Your words meant a lot to me, so glad you like the length of my chapters - as in life, I can't seem to keep things short!! I just want to explore everything. I sometimes do have to reign myself in though, and my beta helps me with that. Thank you so much for reading.

[tizi17]

uuuhhh... that was niiice!!!!
well boys, more practice needed here, i guess.. ;-))

thanks for this chapter!

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Tizi, thanks for your comment, glad you liked it!! And of course, they need more practice- they need lots and lots of practice. ;) Thanks for reading.

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Lindsey, thanks so much for your comment. I'm so glad you liked it, I wanted this to be special but realistic, and I also wanted to include a few things from the Short story. Ennis is fundamentally the same as canon Ennis, but he's moved with the times a little (but not much!). I couldn't have him not saying anything to Jack, he had to talk in my story!! Thanks so much for reading.