Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 4

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Pairing: Ennis and Jack
Summary: Ennis and Jack are working as counselors on a children's camp for the summer. Their meeting on the first evening on the camp leads to a friendship neither had expected,

Comments

[tui77]

I am really enjoying your story. Well written, good characterisations, good dialogue.

Thank you for your story.

[poppyhoney_67]

Thank you so much tui77 for your comment. I am so very glad you are enjoying the story and that you like the characters. Thanks so much for reading.

[liseron]

Hi ! It's official , I'm stuck with your Story for good ! :-))
You really go on with the whole thing very well , the storyline shows perfectly how the feelings of the Characters develop and , for Jack and Ennis , grow up .
I liked the way they progressively notice things about each other : color of Jack's hair for Ennis , color of Ennis's eyes for Jack...even they don't yet what that's mean .
But they definitely are a step over with the end of the Chapter...thanks to the whiskey as always ( lol)
Mmmmm! I look forward for the next Chap. , I have a good feeling about the way things could be going on !;-)
Oh , and I really don't like Cindy ( real pest ! )...and I really DO like Meli ! She's cool and funny ( I like the way you made her talk ) , and I hope she could find someone else since Ennis is not interested , she certainly deserves it !
Thank you !!! Mireille.

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Mireille, thank you for your lovely comment. I am so glad that you like the story and that you are stuck with it for good!! I don't like Cindy either! lol I'm glad you think Meli is cool and funny - as for her meeting someone else, watch this space! Thanks so much for reading, your comment was wonderful!

[tizi17]

where's the clap-clap thing yhere?
well done girl, really never to worry again about it, ok? and tell your muse 1. we love it and 2. WE WANT MORE...!!

[poppyhoney_67]

Aww Fausta, thank you. Glad you like it and that you want more...I'm working on it!!

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Lindsey

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. So glad you liked it. The date was hard for Ennis but it wasnt as good for Jack as it looked like either. But he's just as confused as Ennis is. That magic and power this thing has over them will be discussed more in the next chapter. Thanks for reading!

Middle of Nowhere, Chapter 4 - nice!

[ennis4me]

Mmmm....what a nice chapter....

I really like the last paragraph....I can just imagine how Ennis' curls must feel....

**When Jack lay in his own bed, his mind and hand wandered to where Ennis had touched his hair. He remembered how his insides had spun around like tumbleweed. As he cradled his head, his fingers recalled the softness of Ennis’s hair in his own hand, and as sleep took him over, the two memories weaved together, seamless and strong.**

Enjoying your story immensely! Thank you so much....Adrianne

Re: Middle of Nowhere, Chapter 4 - nice!

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Adrianne. Thanks for such a lovely comment. I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!