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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 1

Aug 30, 2007 21:11

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Pairing: Ennis and Jack
Summary: Ennis and Jack are working as counselors on a children's camp for the summer. Their meeting on the first evening on the camp leads to a friendship neither had ( Read more... )

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thelastaerie August 30 2007, 21:10:38 UTC

OMG... James Dean!Ennis! i love his entrance :) i am happy to see another new young jack and ennis fic.

the first evening they met... mmm... i think Jack will forget about that long-leg girl soon enough :P

and Melanie sounds like a good pal already. I like where this is going.

Eve

poppyhoney_67 August 30 2007, 21:16:46 UTC

Hi Eve

Thanks so much for your comment. I'm glad you liked it - and Ennis is so James Dean, don't you think? lol Glad you liked that image, I know I did

And the evening is not over yet......

rosiet August 30 2007, 21:16:42 UTC

Oh C. I like the start of this!....And I just wonder WHO the liverpudlian is based on.....hehehehehe although I must say, I realy like her already! I like the effect 'James Dean's' arrival has had on Jack. I will be most interested to see what work he is doing at the camp. I wonder if he will be with the older boys with Jack? And you have him so in character already, sitting alone, his face a mask of stone...and an intrigued Jack wanting to introduce himself, feeling the pull already...

I love the way this flows and I'm certainly looking forward to chapter two!

Rosie
xx

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poppyhoney_67 August 30 2007, 21:24:10 UTC

Keep wondering.....lol

poppyhoney_67 August 30 2007, 21:20:08 UTC

Rosie! Thank you, so much. I am glad you like it. And I think Ennis arriving anywhere would cause a rumble, don't you? You will have to wait and see what Ennis will be doing in camp, all will be revealed in the next chapter. And as for that red haired liverpuddlian...she sounds familiar, doesn't she? lol Thanks for your comment I really do appreciate it.

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poppyhoney_67 August 30 2007, 21:22:33 UTC

You see speedos? Oh god, I see lots of thudding young girls (and boys!) all over the place...let's hope Jack has his life-saving certificate! I'm glad you like the start of this....and I can't really keep the boy's identity a secret, can I? Thanks so much for commenting Lindsey! I really appreciate it.

rosiet August 30 2007, 21:20:05 UTC

What a thought. Jack. Speedos.....*DED*

poppyhoney_67 August 30 2007, 21:23:07 UTC

I'm surprised you didn't mention that first time round!!

smiles_a_lot August 30 2007, 23:27:51 UTC

Speedos? He don't need no stinkin' speedos! I vote for the skinny dipping!! Although...if he does need to wear swimming trunks...I wonder if this camp has OUTDOOR SHOWERS. Hmmm. Outdoor Showers.....

poppyhoney_67 August 31 2007, 06:48:01 UTC

Keep talking Em, I like the direction you're going! lol However, I don't think Jack instructing children in his all together would go down well with the Powers That Be! Instructing tall, lanky boys in the all together - well thats something different entirely. *smirk*

Maravillosa foto carmenmariabs August 30 2007, 21:30:51 UTC

Hi!
He iniciado la lectura de este relato. Tengo gusto de él
Gracias por tu escritura.
Carmen
P.D.: Foto maravillosa, es mi preferida de la pelicula, la he buscado siempre, gracias a ti la he encontrado. ESCAPE natural , feliz y necesario. El titulo lo describe perfectamente.
Lo siento solo hablo y escribo español y poco más.