Keep Your Head Down [10]

Oct 06, 2013 01:47

Pairings: YunJaeMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: boyxboy, mature content.
Summary: Jaejoong wants to be forgiven for leaving HoMin and they know what they want as retribution.
A/N: Bigger A/N at the end of the page. Beware of tense mistakes, grammar mistakes, spelling... oh hell, I just didn't revise this ok?

Yoochun stood in line at Starbucks, patiently waiting for everyone’s coffee order to be out and browsing through the news on his phone. )

title: keep your head down, fanfiction, yunjaemin

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marieluna October 6 2013, 09:02:55 UTC
*takes a breath*
THANK YOU!!!!

ok, now that this is out of thee way... can you believe me when I say that I almost cried when I saw the update? *o* I'm so happy! And please, don't take it the wrong way, didn't mean to pressure you and sorry if that was what it felt like T_T Good luck for uni :D I'm going to restart as well this year.

The sleeping scene was so cute! Even though it felt like a contest between two dogs for a bone ^^' Hope that everything will be alright. Btw, don't worry about tenses, your fics are always pretty much correct grammar wise, one of the reasons I enjoy them soo much :D

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poppy_sky October 7 2013, 02:38:11 UTC
I did not take it as pressure, it actually got me writing because people appreciate this story so much so don't worry :)

That makes me so happy! I'm constantly worrying about doing a good job when I'm writing so you telling me you like my fics because of that really puts a smileon my face :D

And yes, HoMin aren't keen on the idea of sharing Jaejoong anymore....

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loveboojae October 6 2013, 11:35:23 UTC
an update..yeay!!

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poppy_sky October 7 2013, 02:38:27 UTC
:)

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phinea2009 October 6 2013, 12:21:40 UTC
My heart almost jumped out of my mouth when I saw the update notice. Thanks so much. You said you'd let me know and you did :)

I loved the way Yunho and Changmin tried to keep meeting with Jaejoong away from each other and how they reacted when they saw each other. So cute.

I also thought it was pretty adorable they way they had Jaejoong sleeping between them.

I was hoping for a three way cuddling session. That would have made me melt into a puddle of goo.

No pressure but I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

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poppy_sky October 7 2013, 02:40:02 UTC
Of course :)

They want Jaejoongie all to themselves~

They won't be cuddling together anytime soon hahaha, things are still tense between HoMin.

No pressure felt, but no promises are made either :)

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ellennd October 6 2013, 13:25:44 UTC
Loved the chapter! I don't mind waiting for updates, School is hard and time consuming and its more important that you focus on that first. I'm excited to see where this story is headed in the future! Good luck with Uni!!

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poppy_sky October 7 2013, 02:40:55 UTC
I guess it's my way of telling you guys I'm definitely not giving up on this story hehehe.

Thanks for the good wishes!

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snow_meow October 7 2013, 03:06:50 UTC
I find Jaejoong really sneaky in the way he called both of them over.

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