Keep Your Head Down [9]

[poppy_sky]

Pairings: YunJaeMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: boyxboy, mature content.
Summary: Jaejoong wants to be forgiven for leaving HoMin and they know what they want as retribution.
A/N: ow come you guys stalk me and you still get lucky? LOL

Comments

[cindelius]

Soo happy that you updated. It may be short, but it still gives us some sense of progress in terms of relationship building and a pulse on emotions for the characters. I like the twist that Changmin and Yunho see each other as competition for Jaejoong's affection/attention and are each keeping their interactions a secret.

You've set up a nice contrast between Yunho and Changmin in terms of their expectations and motivations when it comes to Jaejoong (the emotional components shed light on the actions that led up to this and why they might act slightly differently). I'm really curious to see what the text said and where these new, evolving dynamics take the characters.

Thanks for sharing!

[poppy_sky]

Have I told you that I love your comments? ♥

You really seem to put thought into them, thank you!

[dulanis]

ummmm SPOT????

[dulanis]

Yes.... you updated and for that you get JaeCookies!!!!! ;)

[poppy_sky]

OM NOM NOM.

[ellennd]

YAY!!!!!! I got super excited when I saw you updated!!! I like this chapter. I like that Changmin is wanting to make Jae his. I wonder what will happen next!

[poppy_sky]

Changmin has Oedipus complex

LOL, sorry for the slow updating... ^^;

[n3uromanc3r]

I'm so glad you updated, I missed this story!

I like the slow progress in Jae's relationships with both of them, it's understandable he's cautious but it seems he feels it's time to let them a little bit closer, right?

And Junsu with his less strict attitude compared to Yoochun made me so happy, it was sweet how they talked about this hypothetical old friend of Jae...

[poppy_sky]

Sorry for updating only now :(

Maybe he will~

Well, Yoochun is the BFF of course he wants HoMin kicked to another planet hahaha. Junsu, not being to close to Jae can see the whole situation from a different perspective.

[snow_meow]

thank you for the update.

It's interesting that after everything some bonds cannot be broken but it's sad to see that both Yunho and Changmin are keeping secrets from each other.

[poppy_sky]

Everything will eventually be cleared up between them, don't worry :)

And thank you for still remembering this story hehehe ^^;