Comments | poppy_sky: Keep Your Head Down [8]

poppy_sky

Keep Your Head Down [8]

Apr 04, 2012 21:59

Pairings: YunJaeMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: boyxboy, mature content.
Summary: Jaejoong wants to be forgiven for leaving HoMin and they know what they want as retribution.
A/N: LOL, I don't know what I'm writing anymore.

( Jaejoong stared at his reflection in the mirror, fingers tugging at his skin here and there, sighing when he found a small wrinkle, frowning at the dark circles that seemed to permanently mar the skin below his eyes. )

title: keep your head down, fanfiction, yunjaemin

Comments 58

spirit_queen24 April 5 2012, 06:27:44 UTC

OMO! I JUST REALIZED AFTER READING THIS WHOLE CHAPTER THAT THIS IS NOT A ONE SHOT!O.O I feel stupid lol

I was sooo confused until I realixed that this was a chaptered fic and that I am soooo far from chapter 1 lol Is this the last chapter?

*goes off to read chapter 1*

poppy_sky April 5 2012, 07:25:44 UTC

LOL, not stupid, you just got spoiled XD;

And no, this is not the last chapter. There are still more to come~

ema_tsukimori April 5 2012, 06:51:07 UTC

gOsh, i lOve yOu sOO much fOr the update <3
heart yOu bb ^ ^

poppy_sky April 5 2012, 07:34:09 UTC

Heart you too~<3

anna6285 April 5 2012, 08:46:17 UTC

I'm glad things are somewhat looking up, but I still personally find it unfair how much mental and physical torture Jaejoong had to go through and here Yunho is being forgiven already...
lol don't mind me

poppy_sky April 5 2012, 17:42:26 UTC

Yeah, but Jae wants to forgive them. Usually people that go through abusive relationships keep forgiving their tormentor (hell, even Rihanna forgave Chris Brown).

And well, if Jae never forgave them then there wouldn't be a pairing and people DID vote for a pairing so yeah :|

n3uromanc3r April 5 2012, 12:13:19 UTC

Ahhh... it sounds promising... I'm glad they're trying to fix things finally. But I still can't decide between YunJae and MinJae...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

poppy_sky April 5 2012, 17:42:57 UTC

It's already been decided hahaha, so don't fret about it :)

n3uromanc3r April 5 2012, 22:03:30 UTC

So it will be YunJaeMin?
I wasn't aware that you already decided... : D

poppy_sky April 6 2012, 05:26:34 UTC

Oh well, why not, I'll tell ya: yes, it will stay as YunJaeMin LOL.

It took me a while to count the votes (and count them again when I forgot) but it's finally done :)

dulanis April 5 2012, 13:28:35 UTC

Should I hope for HoMinJae???? And love the chapter. Yunho is great, apologizing like that. Jae needs to adjust to them slowly.
I love this :)

poppy_sky April 5 2012, 17:44:59 UTC

You have to wait and see ;D

Your icon is always so distracting, LOL.