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lydiere in poncywriters

PSX: Thirty-seven

Mar 11, 2006 19:07

Title: Thirty-seven
Author: lydiere
Prompt: 1. A love letter. 2. Bridges. 3. Bracing for impact. 4. Excess
Wordcount: 1,448

( You can see the bridges from the airplane as it circles down to land at Schipol. )

psx, lydiere

Comments 1

liadlaith March 11 2006, 12:51:19 UTC

It's very interesting, and I love all the little character notes for the people, but I think it needs more. More time to explore the characters, to let the mystery unfold.